Poem 13. Not Just A Piece Of Me

For my dearest hubby

When you say  you do,
I said it's same with me
We feel the same thing,
like what we used to be.
A kiss is not just a pat
But a passionate sign of affection
A touch is not just a tap
But a gentle mark of devotion.
A clinch is not just a hug
But a deep evidence of my feelings
I love you for who you are
Nothing more, nothing less
And I dare to say you got me completely
Not just a piece of me...

Reviews

[captain]

very smooth in rhythm.
the highlights of the poem:

a passionate sign of affection
A touch is not just a tap
But a gentle mark of devotion.
A clinch is not just a hug
But a deep evidence of my feelings

those feelings are all true to me, in heart and mind. This is truly brilliant write!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Captain.

[KurKota]

This is a very nice, thoughtful tribute to an apparently very lucky man. Very nice writing, as it conveys sincerity and love in a beautiful way.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks :)

[KurKota]

You are welcome.

[zainul]

Wonderful way of expressing love to the life partner.
The world also knew how to love in a conjugal life.
Thanks for sharing.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, zainul. Love is really a mystery. When I try to write something different, I cannot easily find the words to write. But when it is about love, it seems that the words are only waiting to be written, they're just there in my heart.
Thanks for reviewing my simple work.

[zainul]

I am amazed to read your statement about love.
I understand that your heart is full of love.read moreI am amazed to read your statement about love.
I understand that your heart is full of love.
I hope that your heart will always be a source of warm love for your life partner.
Cheers!

[DIVYA]

He's very lucky and you...
write very beautifully!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the review. :)

[Extant]

Really sweet and sincere, but not over the top in either area. It was really pleasant to read this. "Not just a piece of me . . . " is a great idea and well presented here.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks:)

[Pax]

ahh... your really romantic kabayan...
your words dances in the highs of love of what you felt...
very endearing!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Pax.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful photo and amazing poetry. The simple gifts of love are what we need. Thank you for the outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, CP.