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When You Fall In Love

When You Fall In Love

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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I composed and performed this one for my sister...

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WHEN YOU FALL IN LOVE

 

What made you fall in love?

What made you hear your heart?

Sometimes you smile, sometimes you cry

But still you never give up.

 

What made you wise and strong

though chances are so cruel?

Sometimes you feel alone

But your heart tells there’s someone

 

Refrain:

Someone to share with your soul and mind

Somebody to lean on and cares for you…ohh…

 

Chorus:

That’s when you fall in love

The time you say you do

You cannot hide into the world

That you are not two

But now you’ll live as one

That’s when you fall in love.



What made you wise and strong

though chances are so cruel?

Sometimes you feel alone

But your heart tells there’s someone



Refrain:

Someone to share with your soul and mind

Somebody to lean on and cares for you…ohh…

 

Chorus:

That’s when you fall in love

The time you say you do

You cannot hide into the world

That you are not two

But now you’ll live as one

That’s when you fall in love.


© 2015 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
For my sister


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OMG! What a great melodious song you composed. Thanks for letting me know about this or else i'd have missed the chance to hear this beautiful song of yours. This's the best song and am glad to hear it.. and am sure your sister would've loved this song either as same as I loved this much.

You Rock, Dhaye!
Keep on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon. :)



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Nice lyrics Dhaye though the video was unavailable nice work

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

W R Stowe

5 Years Ago

very sweet and sentimental song and nice voice and your welcome,June 4 is my wife's interview date w.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Wow! I am glad to hear that. Good luck for you. God bless!
W R Stowe

5 Years Ago

thank you Dahye
It's been a year since I posted this composition. Sometimes I have this feeling that my old works are still better than my new ones, though I'm continuously working hard to improve myself. Or shall I say, I am just a simple person and I like more my simple pieces?

Posted 7 Years Ago


oh my, brillient write. Facinate on it. Good to great.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, S. =)
I came back to listen again.....I so enjoyed seeing you perform and hearing your voice, Dh! You are so very talented! Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha! You are so kind, Lydi. I really appreciate your second visit to this piece. =)
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Truly my pleasure!
This is such a beautiful song - much better than my works, I think. You have a great voice, too, Kabayan !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Hmmnn...don't compare. I told you, you have to make the pitch of your song higher. I'm sure you can .. read more
Prime

7 Years Ago

Haha nga naman.

I'll really make a better one. Haha ! And I guess I'll get a good vocal.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Sus, suko na kaagad si Totoy. Hehe.
It's up to you. Cge, pag nagustuhan ko yung voclist mo, ip.. read more
OMG! What a great melodious song you composed. Thanks for letting me know about this or else i'd have missed the chance to hear this beautiful song of yours. This's the best song and am glad to hear it.. and am sure your sister would've loved this song either as same as I loved this much.

You Rock, Dhaye!
Keep on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon. :)
Writing not only the lyrics, but the music and then performing it is quite a feat, Dh....your sister must have been very moved when you sang this for her. Such true words too. When you are in love, you are still an individual, but it is almost as if there are three entities interacting...she, he, and we. This is truly wonderful. LydI**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for supporting this old post, Lydi.
Very, very brilliant! Your voice is wonderful. Join us..>> http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/MUSIC-101/10569/

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Raymond. I'll try.
Nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
A writer, a singer with great voice and a keyboard player. Amazing kabayan! The music video is great but i am bit distracted of your "hand movements" other than that its beautiful. You should create more of this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment and for the suggestion. :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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