Poem 7.   Love Me

Poem 7. Love Me

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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You must love me completely

"
Love me like this is my last chance
 to be with you.
Nothing should be squandered.
 Cuddle me like your child.
Use me like a glass in your hand.

Love me like I am the last gem you have.
No part of me should be castoff
for something slight.
Use me as long as you want
until the last tick I have.
I am your time, your precious time.


© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
You must love me completely...


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Lovely poem. I really liked the second para .. Time is really precious and you have beautifully written this !

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Inder. :)
So much symbolism into this touching write....

"Love me like I am the last gem you have. "
That speaks out loud my friend.

The need for a hug, an embrace, is there,
You worded security or feeling comfort by some at its best,

Thank you for your precious quill.

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Thanks. You inspired me a lot. :)

11 Years Ago

Aw, really, that's one of the reasons, I think I keep on writing here... so did you! with me...
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Yeah. :)
A beautiful poem my friend. If I could go back in time. I would of made the night longer and held tighter. Thank you for the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Thanks, CP :)
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Pax
"Love me like I am the last gem you have" ~ how endearing... I felt the love, the warm feeling it brought... wonderfully expressed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Haha. You don't know it's about time? It's at the last line of this poem. Lol :) I used personificat.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

hahaha... ako yun....lol...
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Aray! (:
It is really true we have to spend our time wisely, love this poem it is speaks reality and I can relate easily to the flow of the words expressed. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment, Marc. :)
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Welcome always :)
Aww. I feel the emotions coming out from this. I wish I could tell this to someone. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Yes, and don't forget you must do it now. Use your time now. Love your time. Once it's lost, you can.. read more
This piece reminds me not to procrastinate (but i always do). Very well written piece kabayan.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab.

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Added on April 7, 2013
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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