A Ribbon for You

A Ribbon for You

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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A Concrete Poetry

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© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Ok, Dhaye. Let me tie that ribbon on your dress. You deserve not just a shining red ribbon but also a glittering gold crown.
Not only does your poem form a perfect image but also holds a great weight. That ribbon must be heavy! hehehe
While I was reading it, I was like chanting a wonderful song. The rhyming effected beautifully. Simple words were used but the poesy is very much on the rise. The musicality and the rhythm made it easy for me to free-flowingly read through.

Are there other colors available?
=)


- joe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Joe

8 Years Ago

You're welcome, Dhaye. For me, this piece is flawless so I have not mentioned any objections about t.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Yes! At last, I passed the taste of a great literati. Thanks a lot 10X. It's up to you if there's so.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

How about the first one I made? It's title is Dream (A Distant Star). It does not have color but the.. read more



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I hope you win the contest.
The words and rhymes are so good,
with the ribbon of creativity tied over it:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Pink Witch. I am inspired by your compliments. :)
Ok, Dhaye. Let me tie that ribbon on your dress. You deserve not just a shining red ribbon but also a glittering gold crown.
Not only does your poem form a perfect image but also holds a great weight. That ribbon must be heavy! hehehe
While I was reading it, I was like chanting a wonderful song. The rhyming effected beautifully. Simple words were used but the poesy is very much on the rise. The musicality and the rhythm made it easy for me to free-flowingly read through.

Are there other colors available?
=)


- joe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Joe

8 Years Ago

You're welcome, Dhaye. For me, this piece is flawless so I have not mentioned any objections about t.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Yes! At last, I passed the taste of a great literati. Thanks a lot 10X. It's up to you if there's so.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

How about the first one I made? It's title is Dream (A Distant Star). It does not have color but the.. read more
My second Concrete Poetry..an entry to a contest. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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