Poem 11. Wheel of Life

You're maybe at the bottom today, but tomorrow you'll be on top...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Notsoloud]

This is a good poem of earthly advice. Sometimes we get lost in the joys and sorrows of life that we don't see either coming. Your parents are wise people and have surely spun the wheel several times. Nice form on the poetry though some may have trouble reading I can appreciate the art in it.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gentleman. :)

[Jack...]

So very cool. I liked this so much. I was caught up in reading and found the pattern dancing on my eyes. Very well done and a beautiful and honest message conveyed.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Jack. :)

[Akashi]

This seems hard to put together. I never knew you could make words appetizing (eek, sorry I couldn't find anything else to say!)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

It's really not easy to make a concrete poetry but it's enjoyable to make.
Thanks for liking it. :)

[Akashi]

It was my pleasure, mademoiselle.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW!...I am at Awe!
This is amazing, unique, and endearing... I loved the message within this piece...
Great work! :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Robbie.:)

[Sami Khalil]

A very creative wheel of thoughts that is full of wisdom and common sense. The recipe for joy and peace ... Thank you for sharing...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit, Sami. I am always inspired by your reviews. My smile :)

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling back...You are welcome...:)

[Magnolia]

Wow, cleverly crafted...and words of wisdom too ! ...Maggie

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Maggie. Glad you dropped by.:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Certainly a cathartic message here, beautifully crafted, well done

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sheema. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

You are very welcome Dhaye, shape poems can be difficult to construct and I think that you have done a great job here

[Ency Bearis]

A concrete poem you written and presented well, very nice and I like the message too.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sir Ency. I owe this to you. Without your first posted concrete poetry, perhaps I can't make anything concrete like this. I have already four pieces now. Thanks to you. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Much fun isn't it ? You had to think about not only the words but how to fit it within the structure.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, and it hones my creativity, too. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Great : )

[Sam]

That's sooooo awesome!!! How did you do that!

Im in fifth grade and I dont know much about things

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Really? It's time-consuming but enjoyable job in poetry.

If you like to see my older concrete poetry, you can search for these pieces:
- Cry of My heart
- A Distant Star
- A Ribbon For You

Thanks for the R&R. Glad you like my concrete poetry.

[Tate Morgan]

that is very well done and beautifully told Parents always a joy when they share wisdom

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tate. :)