My Last Night With You

A Song

You held my hand

And hugged me tight

You kissed my lips

But it’s not as sweet like before.

 

I looked at you

And gave a smile

But you closed your eyes

With tears that rolling by.

 

Refrain:

You want to say goodbye

But you can’t say a word

 

Chorus:

My last night with you was a tragedy

Our love had its end

And I was in misery

On my last night with you.

 

You stepped your way

Out of my door

You looked back at me

But I said you must go on.

(Refrain)

(Chorus)

Bridge:

Ooohh,wooh

Ooohh, wooh

Did I make any mistake

Why you have to leave me like this?

(Chorus…except last line)

Chorus 2:

My last night with you

Was our last goodbye

Our love had its end

Now I am asking why

That's my last night with you

My last night with you (2X)

Author's Note

At last! After two years, I have made the music for this composition.

Reviews

[Ency Bearis]

I think this is a beautiful lyrics for music, such a captivating words for a song.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks po, Sir Ency. :)

[Ency Bearis]

My pleasure and you're welcome

[Jack...]

Dhaye, this is beautiful. I do not have sound on my work computer but will listen as soon as I get home tonight. I can't wait.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I'm sorry Jack, but that's not the real music of my song. I am not yet finish doing it because I have a problem with my first video. That's a temporary background music only.

Thanks for sparing your time with this. I hope I can fix my problem with the video soon.

[Jack...]

Please let me know when you do.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Okay, Jack. Thanks again. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. A poetess along with a song writer and story teller. Multi-talented lady... A good one...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. You always inspire me with your words. And you're the first to review this, huh! Thanks a lot. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)