Poem 12. Cry Of My Heart

(Concrete Poetry) For a friend _ It's just a piece of cake. Move on!

Author's Note

Reviews

[Izabe143]

I love it!! So much

[Brianna Brie]

This is a fabulous concrete poem. I love the idea of a broken heart and a tear.

[Androglossia]

Maganda! Very distinct yong form and the flow is consistent. Ang galing:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Maryanne. :)

[Allen Smuckler]

I'm an old man Dhaye...at least in age....but good lord...
I couldn't relate more to this beautiful, honest, visual write.
It's clarity...passion...and yes, even heartbreak shone through the broken heart...and even more the question mark...intentional or not, it sure worked for me...
Great write, Dhaye
Allen

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Allen. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Really, it looks like a question mark, that figure at the bottom? It's my heart's teardrop ( as my poem's title is Cry of my Heart). Thanks again. :)

[Allen Smuckler]

that works too...:))

[mynameis_ella]

Hi, nice writing :)
Please don't stop writing.
Cheers!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Bagong shape na nman di ko na kakayin to lol, hirap gawin :) I wish I could try this, seems difficult task to do. Honest and captivating words expressed well. Thanks for sharing Dhaye.

[Pax]

Oh ~ i really love the shape of a broken heart and how the speaker now live's to be in a moving on phase of his/her life... Wonderful kabayan!

[Ency Bearis]

Lovely poem and heart. Nice work.

[Souladareatease]

A beautiful Heart shown!!!
Great work!!!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Soulareatease. :)

[DIVYA]

Love, however strong and irresistible it may be has to weighed in a balance with self-respect and a bit of pride. So if found wanting, it is time to revaluate and move on...

Beautifully said Dhaye and I love the heart shape too.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Divya.:)