CHAPTER V.  THE MAN OF MY DREAM

CHAPTER V. THE MAN OF MY DREAM

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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I looked at his belt down to his toes. He has that long, muscled legs in those pants. I know it.

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HAPTE

He is wearing a business formal attire- the usual look of an executive officer like him. His eyes are tantalizing with enough length of lashes. His lips seem kissable. He has broad shoulders and big muscles. His nose is not as pointed to that of my celebrity crush but enough not to be called as flat. What a lovely face of a man!

I looked at his belt down to his toes. He has that long, muscled legs in those pants. I know it.

                “What are you doing, girl?” It’s Marian again. “Why are you closing your eyes while touching every part of that picture of Mr. Morales? Hmm.  Don’t tell me , you are making fantasy on that picture!” Marian is teasing me.

I got up and get a pillow to hit her but she tries to escape. We end up playing like our favorite cartoon Tom and Jerry.



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Pax
you are making fantasy on that picture ~ i think you need to be more specific here ~ tasteful or delightful fantasy ~ somewhat goes like that :) hehe

there are some awkward sentences i see, but I'm sure you'll find it ~ kasi mas magaling ka sa akin :) , i know you are ~ other than that the story comes out very fast ~ it's like you jump here ~ i even didn't know how did you get that picture of mr. MOrales... or what happen next to that elevator scene ~ had she gone late ~ or how was the meeting with mr. Morales ~ or is the man in the elevator scene mr. Morales ~ ??? ~ many question comes up... ~ continuing on, maybe i'll find it in the next chapter ~ good chapter so far ~

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Next chapter nga po. Sabi ko sa iyo, flashback eh. hehe.
Pax

8 Years Ago

lol ~ sorry di ko alam kasi walang naka lagay eh ~ hehe



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Parang nagmmadali :) yung story progression, anyway its better may build-ups muna bago "He is wearing" why not injecting an idea na isang gabi bago matulog, pag bukas mo nga drawer nakita mo ang picture, or nagbabasa ka ng magazine at tapos naka feature doon si Mr. Morales. Marami pwedi i explore and the idea is cool, I know magagawa mo yun kasi you are good. :) Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Wala sa akin yun. Nakiusap nga lang ako sa inyo na pagtiyagaan to eh. Sige lang.
Pax

8 Years Ago

lol ~ flash back na ang uso...haha
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Hehehe. Sa akin lang naman uso. :)
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Pax
you are making fantasy on that picture ~ i think you need to be more specific here ~ tasteful or delightful fantasy ~ somewhat goes like that :) hehe

there are some awkward sentences i see, but I'm sure you'll find it ~ kasi mas magaling ka sa akin :) , i know you are ~ other than that the story comes out very fast ~ it's like you jump here ~ i even didn't know how did you get that picture of mr. MOrales... or what happen next to that elevator scene ~ had she gone late ~ or how was the meeting with mr. Morales ~ or is the man in the elevator scene mr. Morales ~ ??? ~ many question comes up... ~ continuing on, maybe i'll find it in the next chapter ~ good chapter so far ~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Next chapter nga po. Sabi ko sa iyo, flashback eh. hehe.
Pax

8 Years Ago

lol ~ sorry di ko alam kasi walang naka lagay eh ~ hehe
So sweet a fantasy. A picture poster Hero for sure. You captured that adoration that longing so well here Dhaye. Every woman's dream man.

Made for a beautiful read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks :) That's the 5th chapter of my novella. :)

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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