THORNS

THORNS

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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A Limerick

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Flowers  in white, red and  yellow

I always see them as I see you

But you’re a Rose with piercing thorns

Holding you  makes me badly  worn

Now, I want a Daisy more than you.








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Now I know why rose is a flower for hearts


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

:) :) :)
Very beautiful !!! Congrats on your win :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Rose is a beautiful flower but can hurt me...just like people who are pretty in the outside .. read more
Debbie_Philly

8 Years Ago

:)
some people having pretty faces but not pretty soul ... so its better to love those people who don't have pretty faces but pretty soul .. and that make them more pretty and enchanter :) ..your poem is so beautiful . love it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Lily. :)
I love it...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
That's exactly my sentiments as well. that's why i prefer sunflowers. =) Nice limerick!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab. :)
Limerick, I don't know what that means but this poem brings a romantic feel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Captain. A Limerick poem has an aabba rhyme. :)
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Sam
The flowers you put in the poem look sooooooooo beautiful!!
Good Job! Your details make a flow to your piece of writing! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks. :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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