THORNS

A Limerick

Flowers  in white, red and  yellow

I always see them as I see you

But you’re a Rose with piercing thorns

Holding you  makes me badly  worn

Now, I want a Daisy more than you.

Author's Note

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Now I know why rose is a flower for hearts

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

:) :) :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Very beautiful !!! Congrats on your win :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Rose is a beautiful flower but can hurt me...just like people who are pretty in the outside but not in the inside. The Daisy flower symbolizes a person whom we think weak and not that so beautiful but he/she's not harmful.

[Debbie_Philly]

:)

[Lily Finch]

some people having pretty faces but not pretty soul ... so its better to love those people who don't have pretty faces but pretty soul .. and that make them more pretty and enchanter :) ..your poem is so beautiful . love it :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Lily. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I love it...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[gabrielle]

That's exactly my sentiments as well. that's why i prefer sunflowers. =) Nice limerick!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gab. :)

[captain]

Limerick, I don't know what that means but this poem brings a romantic feel.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Captain. A Limerick poem has an aabba rhyme. :)

[Sam]

The flowers you put in the poem look sooooooooo beautiful!!
Good Job! Your details make a flow to your piece of writing! :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks. :)