Short Story 1. MISTAKEN

                “I can’t lose you,” I said to him with teary eyes.

            “Then, what was that last night? ” he said with bitterness.

            “That’s a friendly kiss.”

            “But it’s not for me. I love you more than a friend so I must go.”

           

              He walks away while the raindrops start to fall.

Author's Note

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I guess that is what some may consider the difference between making love and sex, emotions get all shuffled like a deck of cards. Nice kid.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! I'm not a kid anymore. Thank you for the nice visit, MM. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad vision create by the words. Separation is always hard. Sometime life isn't fair. We lose people because we can't control the situation. Thank you for sharing the excellent tale.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

That's true. We lose people because we can't control the situation. Thanks for the insights.

[Sami Khalil]

I love this touching poem especially that last line. It was great...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. It is a teaser of my book My One True Love.

[Sami Khalil]

I like...You are welcome...:)

[The dark story]

OH That sounds touching and intrigiung to read some more of it...i do hope there's something more to it, can i?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Atiba, my dear. That's already Book 2. If you have more time, be familiar with the characters by reading Book 1 A Summer Love Story. Then Book 2 , My One True Love, has already 10 chapters. :)

Glad you like this teaser. :)

[The dark story]

oh...ooooppss...i didn't knew that..i was just visiting your profile and read that it's a story...sorry for my stupidity...and thanks for telling me about it...i'll get on to it soon

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, no one is stupid. Don't say that to yourself, and I don't even want to hear that being said to anybody. If you have time, I am really grateful if you can read my books. Thanks. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

You have finely drawn this scene, nice work :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hmmm seems cool, a friendly kiss the whole night? keep wrting.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe.Marc,Grabe ka. Teaser yan ng next chapter ni Rico at Clarrise.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Excited :) hehehe kasi kiss lang eh di tulad yung sa lagoon lol :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. Magiging conservative na siya jan. Kakahiya namang malandi ang buntis, di ba? Lol. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Ay buntis bilis hahaha. sigue na tapusin mo na para mabasa na namin :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

A teaser for my book ONE TRUE LOVE. Just finding inspiration to go on with the next Chapters.