Poem 20.   YOUR SONG

Poem 20. YOUR SONG

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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A Tribute to a Friend

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I hear your song echoes in the midst of the  night

With my bare feet, I walk in the dark

Just to see you, the voice that I hear

Never care of the risks I have to bear.

 

 

Your voice guides me where I should go

The echoes are the trails and now I can see you

You tell me some stories which makes me ponder

I laugh at every humorous word while we chatter.

 

 

Who shall forget you as my tour guide?

You lead me into my world, now I don’t have to hide

For I am now complete, an artist of my kind

Your song pushes me up to take pleasure of my mind.




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Beautiful tribute. But to an unkown friend? Now that sounds weird. Don't get me wrong, your poem is full of awesomeness and the gratefulness you felt for that person is made obvious on each line. It's a shame that the person remained unknown. I think an extra mile is needed to give justice to this piece. Great one Miss dhaye!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Yes, an unknown friend the time I'm making this poem, Maryanne. He's the one I mentioned in my featu.. read more
Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

So he is technically no longer unknown:) That's an interesting way to start a friendship. Well some .. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha. Anong interesting way to start a friendship? Bahala siya if ayaw niya ng friendship. Basta ako.. read more



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weird but beautifulllllllll :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Lily Finch. :)
A beautiful and positive poem. Good friends are like gold. I like the song also. Good to hear new version of songs with amazing and beautiful words. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, CP :)
Loved this, dhaye! Truly inspirational. Those with such friends in life are truly lucky.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, I Have a Voice. :)
there are people in our life which has done so much for us that we just can't describe that in words,they guided us in constructing the bridge of our life and filling it with priceless fragrance!! truly such people mark their impression on our mind and becomes hard to forget them...i liked the theme and the style a lot...it's so ravishing to read and elegantly penned that i could just say,"whoa! STUNNING!"...the diction are strong as well and they quite impactful in their usage...amazing write!!

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Atiba. I greatly appreciate your compliments. :)
Something which cannot be describe in few words are friends.
"I laughed at every humorous word while we chatter." These lines means a lot and I missed my late friend who died in mishap.
It has to be dealt in some other ways Dhaye you simply re-called my old memories with this poem.

Truly cherish every single word you wrote.
Kept me speechless :)

Regards,
Singh :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Singh. :)
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Welcome Dear :)
I love that song, love this poem, it feels good, and it makes others feel good and that seems to be rare nowadays.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Corset :)
Beautiful tribute. But to an unkown friend? Now that sounds weird. Don't get me wrong, your poem is full of awesomeness and the gratefulness you felt for that person is made obvious on each line. It's a shame that the person remained unknown. I think an extra mile is needed to give justice to this piece. Great one Miss dhaye!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Yes, an unknown friend the time I'm making this poem, Maryanne. He's the one I mentioned in my featu.. read more
Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

So he is technically no longer unknown:) That's an interesting way to start a friendship. Well some .. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha. Anong interesting way to start a friendship? Bahala siya if ayaw niya ng friendship. Basta ako.. read more
What a beautiful poem, a great tribute to someone who has helped you to grow. In your writing, the best way to honor a friend who has encouraged you. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Rita. :)
Beautiful Dhaye. You have a kind and caring heart and it shows in your verses.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Jack. I am just grateful to someone who helped me get into WC, and yet I know his FB page on.. read more

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