Poem 10.   GO BACK TO YOUR WORLD

Poem 10. GO BACK TO YOUR WORLD

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)



You see their glaring eyes

You hear their reproving voice

You feel their cruel touch

And you feel deep inside that fear

Of being alone

And you think it’s the right time to go

Away from those who condemn.

 

For quite some time you leave

To reflect on your deeds

What went wrong?

What have I done?

I left my world because of fear.

Should I stay in this place

Where I can’t find myself dreaming?

I can’t feel the pain

But I can’t feel the joy, either

Or should I go back to my world

Where I can be who I am

Though the battles are everywhere

But still I know I have a place to hide?

 

It is your world, I know.

Before there is me, there was you.

You are that clever

Though sometimes sensitive

But your words are foods for thought

That anyone could take.

So maybe it’s time to let go

Of the feelings that detained you

From your fears.

 

I am who I am who says

If I am one of those you feel

Who condemn you for your deeds

I’ll close my eyes and ears

So as not to see you

And not to hear your voice

And I will vanish in your sight

So that you won’t feel that fear again

And you can go back to your world

Without my existence.




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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When some people could not comprehend our unique or new ideas/propositions, they tend to be overly critical for they somehow feel threatened. In this world, ideas which deviate from the tradition are being frowned upon and such feeling of contempt would overflow on the person postulating such new ideas. Dhaye, the aforementioned are the things that came into mind when i read your piece. the last part of the piece undoubtedly show how compassionate the voice is and how much he/she value peace. Very well-written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

lol ~ segi, isabay mo nalng doon sa listahan ko sa tubig... hehe
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Abababah! Naniningil ka rin pala? Hehe. May utang nga pala ako sa iyo. Paano na yan, naibuhos ko na .. read more
gabrielle

7 Years Ago

lol. pag namatay ako sa kakatawa dito mumultuhin kita dhaye. naimagine ko bigla itsura ko pag suot k.. read more



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I agree with gabrielle, good job Dhaye

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
your voice is heard Lola ~ i feel you here...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Asan ako? Hehe. Kagabi pa tayo nagkukulitan ni Gab, now ka lang nagreview at super haba pa. Hehe. :)
Pax

7 Years Ago

hahahahahaha ~ wala na kasi akong masabi eh...lol, i can't stop laughing here...haha... ang haba nga.. read more
When some people could not comprehend our unique or new ideas/propositions, they tend to be overly critical for they somehow feel threatened. In this world, ideas which deviate from the tradition are being frowned upon and such feeling of contempt would overflow on the person postulating such new ideas. Dhaye, the aforementioned are the things that came into mind when i read your piece. the last part of the piece undoubtedly show how compassionate the voice is and how much he/she value peace. Very well-written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

lol ~ segi, isabay mo nalng doon sa listahan ko sa tubig... hehe
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Abababah! Naniningil ka rin pala? Hehe. May utang nga pala ako sa iyo. Paano na yan, naibuhos ko na .. read more
gabrielle

7 Years Ago

lol. pag namatay ako sa kakatawa dito mumultuhin kita dhaye. naimagine ko bigla itsura ko pag suot k.. read more
Beautiful work. The two voices in this poem shine a poignant light on how many individuals here in the US tend to treat those who come here for sanctuary from war and strife...

Bravo and well done

Namaste

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Mother M. Glad you visit on my page. :)
The battle of the world, lol :) great write, though I am not really sure about the settings of this piece but it is a good one. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

7 Years Ago

Ako nga parang aalis na rin ako dito kasi nawala na ang passion ko sa writing. pero back up ko muna .. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Why naman nawala eh passion mo nga yun? Biglang-bigla naman yan? Kwentuhan mo naman ako..PM mo sa ak.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

7 Years Ago

Lol ganun talaga ako Dhaye heheh pero babalik din yan, gusto ko lang muna mag relax ang mind ko.
Pulchritudinous poem and with such compassionate message from your heart. Great piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Aha! Another vocabulary from my mentor. Thanks for considering this a beautiful one.
Sometime.. read more
Ency Bearis

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome.

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