Poem 24. SING YOUR SONG AGAIN

Where are you now, my muse?

The first time I heard your song

I gained that hope in me

That the waiting won’t be long

I’ll speak my mind so free.

 

You lead me in this way

I thanked you for that gift

But why you’ve gone away?

You left me not with drift.

 

Did you just lead me here

To start a brand new life?

Or you just felt that fear

Now you can’t Hear My Mind?

 

I looked back at the page

Where you and I are free

I heard your song with shade

While you heard what’s on me.

 

It seems now I’m alone

This world won’t be lovely

Please let me hear your song

That song you sang for me.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pax]

i hear yah, lola ~ you know it must be great to have a friend who really put your writing career a drive.... maybe because in my case no one ever told me that i should write more... it just comes to me... an inspiration that triggers me to write my own... no one ever knew in my friends before i write - somehow a journal of poems that i kept besides me after i sleep... maybe it was my coping mechanism when the time im on my depressive period... i paint alot of dark things at that time... the era in my life that writing becomes a refuge somehow... so enough about me... this poem almost talks about lost of someone to death... or a love one passing or moving on in his life... ok lang yan lola... kaya mo yan... nadito pa kami :)
great work ~100

[annabellee]

such a gorgoeous poem and the music just fitted perfectly. I liked it a lot :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, anabellee. :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Where's the voice that guides me?

[Frieda P]

Sometimes to music in our heart stops when they're no longer with us. Lovely song here.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Frieda.

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and melodic were you words this morning. I could feel the rhthym flow through me as I read. Very nice.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Jack. It's flattering that you find this one beautiful and melodic.

[Vikrantsingh]

Just can't explain how did i felt while reading this.
SING YOUR SONG AGAIN Wow what a heartfelt. I really loved it dear. Must say you got better sense of writing better then me :)
Keep up the better work and will check your work :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"Must say you got better sense of writing better then me."---Please do not compare your works with mine. We are both unique in our own ways. You, too, has that talent in writing. Let us just keep on improving ourselves. Cheers to that!

By the way, I have a Hindi "shout out" under my pen name in my profile. Can you read it for me? If there's a wrong word there, please tell me. Your help is greatly appreciated.

Thanks for the time spent here.

[Vikrantsingh]

No worries I will :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Not able to find... :( could you please share me link :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Okay, I'll paste it here.Please tell me if there's a mistake with my Hindi sentence. "I hona khoya hua...Kahaan jeena aapka geet?" What does it means in English? Please check...

[Vikrantsingh]

Its all wrong written I'm not able to understand. Could you share me the entire poem then i would be able to co-relate it

[Vikrantsingh]

In hoon ne Khoya Huva.. Kahan Jeena Aapka Geet
what have you lost.... were to live in your song.. that what i could correlate

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

It's not a poem. It's just a sentence which I want to tell "I am lost...Where are your songs?" Kindly translate that in Hindi please.

[Vikrantsingh]

Oh.. it comes in this way then --- Aap ke geet mai ... hum kho gayi ;)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Thanks a lot, my friend. I'll paste it now under my pen name. Thanks again. Happy writings to you!

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome :) if you want i can convert them in Hindi and you can use it :)

[Vikrantsingh]

आपकी कविता में ... हम खो गए ... this is original words in Hindi :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Where Kavita is poem (My wife's name).. हम -we खो lost गए... आपकी Your

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Okay, thanks for the offer. I want the other poem, the free verse one to be converted...I AM ALONE..but i think not now because you consumed too much time on my works. I really thank you, Singh. Nobody would do that except you because all are busy in reading and giving reviews. Enjoy your time with others' works now, Singh. Thank you so much.Your help is enough for now.

[Vikrantsingh]

In Hindi i need to know your gender? sorry could you please tell me are you male/female I will write it accordingly.

[Vikrantsingh]

मैं अकेली हूँ - Female I'm Alone
मैं अकेला हूँ - Male ;) I'm Alone

[Sami Khalil]

" looked back at the page
Where you and I are free
I heard your song with shade
While you heard what’s on me.

It seems now I’m alone
This world won’t be lovely
Please let me hear your song
That song you sang for me."
Wow. A very sweet and melodious poem full of meaning and good rhyming. Bravo...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)