Poem 16.    Counting One to Thirty

Poem 16. Counting One to Thirty

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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A baby who's only three (years old) can count from one to thirty!

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My baby, oh my baby!

You know how cute you are

You are the morning sunshine

At night, my brightest star.

 

My baby,  oh my baby!

A gift from heaven’s gate

You showered us with laughter

You made our life so great.

 

My baby, oh my baby!

Is this the time to show?

Your moment to uncover

The flair as now you grow.

 

Your sweet voice counting numbers

From one up to thirty

Isn’t that an achievement

For baby who’s just three?




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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I was expecting to jump into the footprints of a mother watching her child grow from one to thirty, and relating herself to an infant that has only learned such a thing. Meh, not exactly my preference in poetry. While rather intelligent diction you've at your disposal, this just isn't a concept I find myself dabbling in. You have a rather cute child; he oughta grow into a mathematician one day.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tai. :)



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This poem is a real joy to read, to celebrate a three year old's life, in writing such as this, is a pleasure for anyone who reads this wonderful piece, ( especially this child), beautiful work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheema. :)
I was expecting to jump into the footprints of a mother watching her child grow from one to thirty, and relating herself to an infant that has only learned such a thing. Meh, not exactly my preference in poetry. While rather intelligent diction you've at your disposal, this just isn't a concept I find myself dabbling in. You have a rather cute child; he oughta grow into a mathematician one day.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tai. :)
A very cute--obviously, capable--child who ought to be able to say, "Thirty-one."
Sweet and loving ode, well-rhymed.
Impressive work, Dhaye!


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Frank. :)
You're really good at rhyming, no joke. This is very cute. Is this your son? If so then he is equally as cute:) And having an intelligent mother would only make him smarter all the more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

Haha, di naman.. I was fond of using archaic words in old english until people started complaining s.. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

:)
Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

Believe me, this smiley tells a lot more than you know :D
Wow. I just saw this write Dhaye. So sweet and wonderful .

"Your sweet voice counting numbers

From one up to thirty

Isn’t that an achievement"
Great...:)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. Babies are really amazing in their own little ways.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

True, true, true...:)
This is a fun write! Good rhyme and rhythm, and a sweet "song" for a smart baby!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks again, Rita.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

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