Poem 27.   THERE'S SOMETHING YOU SHOULD KNOW

Poem 27. THERE'S SOMETHING YOU SHOULD KNOW

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)



Many nights I thought of you

Another day was another misery

Remembering the past

You and I as friends

And it kept on haunting me.

Never did I forget your kindness.

Never did I lose your image in my mind.

Every second I prayed that

Memories would last forever.

But the chance has made its way

To wake me up from this dream.

Unbelievable, isn’t it? In that never-never land, I

Thought that I could have a true friend.

 

                            ***

                        

There’s something you should know:

You gave me that lesson I can’t forget-

That in that never-never land, everything was just

A part of a dream

And you were just a part of it.

Now, I am widely awake...



© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Immortalizing the friendship.
An amazing tribute to a friend.

The last two lines of the first stanza made me (your reader) think the reasons why the poetic persona had to leave his/her friend, and later on regret the act done.
It is good though, that the poet did not make clarity on it leaving the reader pondering.

I had a good read, Teacher. Thank you for sharing.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Ms. Belle. :)



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wow...this is amazing ....
I loved the "thoughts" - instrumental it went like cream on top :P wooowwwww...................
a very serene work

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tuvi. :)
Very good, very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is a very nice piece dedicated to your friend, the end of it speaks so much. This is so nice Dhaye.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A remarkable panegyric to a friend. An inspiring write and pleasure to read. TFS.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Ency. :)
Ency Bearis

7 Years Ago

you're welcome
So much honest emotions and appreciation for a fellow writer or writers or a general friend that walked with you and inspired you and now it is the time to return their favor to them.
A great write...:)

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
Immortalizing the friendship.
An amazing tribute to a friend.

The last two lines of the first stanza made me (your reader) think the reasons why the poetic persona had to leave his/her friend, and later on regret the act done.
It is good though, that the poet did not make clarity on it leaving the reader pondering.

I had a good read, Teacher. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Ms. Belle. :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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