Poem 1.   BEST FRIENDS FOREVER

Poem 1. BEST FRIENDS FOREVER

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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A Limerick

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What shall I ask for more, my friend?

You are the best, the last, I commend.

I shall not let you walk away

The man of my life,  forever will stay.

Just you and I until the end.



© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Nice to read these words of die hard commitment and loyalty, you seem to blur the line between friendship and lovers here, or I may be wrong, nonetheless, I enjoyed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheema. :)
gorgeous write, so honest and sweet. I enjoyed reading it a lot :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Anabellee. :)
annabellee

6 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
Awesome poem recommended.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Ency. You should also read "My Cafe Friends and I" because I've mentioned the 7 of you .. read more
Ency Bearis

6 Years Ago

Really let me surf where and how you presented it.
Concise yet it speaks fully of the determination to fulfill a lifetime commitment. very commendable dhaye.


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab. Glad to see you again on my page. Happy weekend!
Fun form - good job with the limerick style. A great sentiment - friendship, and all of its joys, is the key!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Yes, thanks, Rita. How lucky I am having my bestfriend as my man forever.
A amazing poem and I like the photo. Good to stay friends and enjoy life together. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, CP. :)

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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