Poem 6.  A TEST

Poem 6. A TEST

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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Don't lose hope

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Be strong, my love. Be strong.
The test won't be so long.
Just live with all your strength
Don't fall. Oh, please don't sink.
I'm not now by your side
But let my love your guide.
Have faith that you'll succeed
That test will surely end.



© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Thank you I feel as though this poem is speaking to me. Thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Cassie. Glad you find this one speaking to you. Hope you're inspired by this.
Cassie

6 Years Ago

Yes i am. Thank you
whoa!!! ^_^
What a nice feeling this poem stirs up!
It is true that in every relationship, tests do come!
But what comes doesn't matter,
only the kind of response we invoke, does.
Nice!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Ricky :)
Good flow of emotions Dhaye, I always loved you work and this one is again a better and stable flow throughout ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Singh. :)
Vikrantsingh

6 Years Ago

You are welcome dear :) As always :)
- Singh :)
A good motivational verses, nice one Daisie.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Ency. I always pray for my loved one to be safe, strong and free from any worries in lif.. read more
TL Boehm

6 Years Ago

This is lovely. We all need to hear words like this spoken to us. For whatever reason, the café won.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, TL :)

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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