Poem 32. Satyrid II

Reminiscing one of my favorites. My review comment to Maryanne's "Satyrid".

If I would be a rare butterfly
On a summer field of Violets
I'll spread my wings up to the sky
And sprinkle fine dusts you won't forget.

I'll give your world soft colors
Of yellow, white and beige
Making a way to honor
And welcome you with peace.

Forever I'll be your satyrid
I'll only stay by your side
My wings your wrap, your shield
As we take a perfect flight.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure if this was your review exactly or you expounded on the original, it's lovely in it's sentiment, the music adds to the soothing feel of your words, quite the treat this early morning...thanks for sharing this one Dhaye, it's a little slice of perfection....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Frieda, I really appreciate your compliment. I can't thank you enough for the kind words you just said. This was really my review... I reworded a stanza of Maryanne's poem "Satyrid" and here it is.

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure, it's really lovely Dhaye, like a lovely stream of light shining through...

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem my friend. I had to read again. To know beauty and freedom is rare in a life. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is one of my favorites. Thanks for reading it.

[Ency Bearis]

Now I think there's a competition of composition about this family of Satyridae. I read the poem of Marriane M. and I read your poem too Daisie about this Satyrid, now maybe I can be one of the butterflies and how you both wrote it brilliantly and remarkably presented. Well I'll just say you both are very creative, unique, and Einstein writers.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Thanks for the compliment, Sir Ency.

Competition? Lol. Never with Maryanne. She's like an encyclopedia and I can't be compared to her when it comes to her wide vocabulary. Mine is limited so I just use literary devices to enhance the poem I make.

But I really appreciate that my mentor described me (just like Maryanne) as creative, unique and Einstein(?) writer. Lol.

You, too is a creative, unique and Einstein writer, Sir.

[Ency Bearis]

My pleasure. I see the question mark on Einstein, it is just one of the synonyms of very smart person.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! Thanks, Sir. I really appreciate that you see me as a very smart person.

[Sami Khalil]

I think Dhaye this is one of my favorites of you. Excellent work...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are elcome...:)

[Androglossia]

Wow. Quite a surprise. My mind is really sloggy right now because of my recent trip but I had to leave a comment on this. First off, this really impressed me big time not only for the excellent word choice but because of its originality. Although this was inspired by my Satyrid, you have skillfully crafted each line to draw off to an entirely different writing style. Bravo! & thank you for the mention, I'm honored.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Lol. I go back to your Satyrid poem and then I copied my comment there. You have mentioned also that I should post this as Satyrid II. I just reworded your last stanza into my first 2 stanzas. My last stanza is the only one original because I only add it to make a different ending.

[SyberRose]

This poem and music is enchanting and wouldnt you just love to be that ballerina floating through the air...gorgeous...loved it...Rose:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Rose. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"my wings your wrap/ your shield"

i love that line...it's a beautiful write in general, but that line really struck me..

being enclosed within a butterfly wings, what could be softer and more peaceful...

jacob

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sir Jacob. :)

[zainul]

Lovely poem.
Wonder why you have chosen 'satyrid'.
I would love to hear from you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Zainul, first of all I want to thank you for finding this poem of mine as a lovely one. This one is my review to my friend Maryanne's poem entitled "Satyrid". I decided to name this "Satyrid II" as my friend suggested to me.

[zainul]

I am thrilled to understand it now.
Yea,there was a statement written in the description.
read moreI am thrilled to understand it now.
Yea,there was a statement written in the description.
But,I could not get it then.
Thanks for the interpretation and sharing.