Poem 32.   Satyrid II

Poem 32. Satyrid II

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Reminiscing one of my favorites. My review comment to Maryanne's "Satyrid".

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If I would be a rare butterfly
On a summer field of Violets
I'll spread my wings up to the sky
And sprinkle fine dusts you won't forget.

I'll give your world soft colors
Of yellow, white and beige
Making a way to honor
And welcome you with peace.

Forever I'll be your satyrid
I'll only stay by your side
My wings your wrap, your shield

As we take a perfect flight.


© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

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I'm not sure if this was your review exactly or you expounded on the original, it's lovely in it's sentiment, the music adds to the soothing feel of your words, quite the treat this early morning...thanks for sharing this one Dhaye, it's a little slice of perfection....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Frieda, I really appreciate your compliment. I can't thank you enough for the kind words you just sa.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure, it's really lovely Dhaye, like a lovely stream of light shining through...



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A amazing poem my friend. I had to read again. To know beauty and freedom is rare in a life. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

This is one of my favorites. Thanks for reading it.
Now I think there's a competition of composition about this family of Satyridae. I read the poem of Marriane M. and I read your poem too Daisie about this Satyrid, now maybe I can be one of the butterflies and how you both wrote it brilliantly and remarkably presented. Well I'll just say you both are very creative, unique, and Einstein writers.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Wow! Thanks for the compliment, Sir Ency.

Competition? Lol. Never with Maryanne. She's.. read more
Ency Bearis

7 Years Ago

My pleasure. I see the question mark on Einstein, it is just one of the synonyms of very smart perso.. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha! Thanks, Sir. I really appreciate that you see me as a very smart person.
I think Dhaye this is one of my favorites of you. Excellent work...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are elcome...:)
Wow. Quite a surprise. My mind is really sloggy right now because of my recent trip but I had to leave a comment on this. First off, this really impressed me big time not only for the excellent word choice but because of its originality. Although this was inspired by my Satyrid, you have skillfully crafted each line to draw off to an entirely different writing style. Bravo! & thank you for the mention, I'm honored.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Lol. I go back to your Satyrid poem and then I copied my comment there. You have mentioned also that.. read more
This poem and music is enchanting and wouldnt you just love to be that ballerina floating through the air...gorgeous...loved it...Rose:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Rose. :)
"my wings your wrap/ your shield"

i love that line...it's a beautiful write in general, but that line really struck me..

being enclosed within a butterfly wings, what could be softer and more peaceful...

jacob

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Jacob. :)
I'm not sure if this was your review exactly or you expounded on the original, it's lovely in it's sentiment, the music adds to the soothing feel of your words, quite the treat this early morning...thanks for sharing this one Dhaye, it's a little slice of perfection....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Frieda, I really appreciate your compliment. I can't thank you enough for the kind words you just sa.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure, it's really lovely Dhaye, like a lovely stream of light shining through...
Lovely poem.
Wonder why you have chosen 'satyrid'.
I would love to hear from you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Zainul, first of all I want to thank you for finding this poem of mine as a lovely one. This one is .. read more
zainul

7 Years Ago

I am thrilled to understand it now.
Yea,there was a statement written in the description.
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