Poem 5.   SUMMER FRIENDS

Poem 5. SUMMER FRIENDS

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Missing the “Kabayan Atin Ito” Group. I am not so active these school days.

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We are like those rare flowers

Which bloom only in summer

We enjoyed the sunlight and a little rain

Together we danced in the fields of green.

 

But now we are no longer dancing together

The truth says that we are nothing

But only few summer flowers

Wishing that it's summer time again...

               


© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

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This reminded me of my childhood summers spent in my grandparent's wherein i got to meet some friends there who made each summer memorable and fun. at the end of each summer, we part ways but on the next summer we played, got dirty and do naughty things again just like what we used to do in the last summer. Those friendships that blossomed during summer could actually last until....forever (if there's a thing as forever). Nicely penned dhaye!

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab. You know how cheerful I am...but at the same time, a dramatic soul. I don't know if the.. read more



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You seem to be an advocate for the flowers which is kind of nourishing, a lovely write.

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this is very special, I really have this love for flowers and it's amazing to read your poem that made a picture for them. Nostalgia crawls in my emotion and I must say I love the choice of music you've put on this poem! Very nice. :)

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, PaperMush. :)
This reminded me of my childhood summers spent in my grandparent's wherein i got to meet some friends there who made each summer memorable and fun. at the end of each summer, we part ways but on the next summer we played, got dirty and do naughty things again just like what we used to do in the last summer. Those friendships that blossomed during summer could actually last until....forever (if there's a thing as forever). Nicely penned dhaye!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab. You know how cheerful I am...but at the same time, a dramatic soul. I don't know if the.. read more
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Is nice how you notice the little things that make the whole difference when people disregard them. Very well said.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, SquinklaPsyOps
Very nicely done Dhaye. Good job

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Cassie.
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Pax
my guess is that you missed those fun times during summer... friends bonding together and spending a happy thoughts .... it reminds me how time pass so fast... and you could wish time turns back and relive the happy moments....

a great piece pretty Dhaye!

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Pax. :)
A marvelous poem Dhaye full of honesty and sincerity blooming with friendship.
Only thing I think it should be in summer instead of on summer . You can double check but I could be wrong.
Went into my library...:)

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. Glad you valued this one and tried to help me enhance this. I'll consider your suggest.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome ...:)

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Margaux  (Dhaye)
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