Poem 30.  LET ME

Poem 30. LET ME

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Just another fictional version. Another attempt...

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Let us fall upon each others' neck.

Let me bury the hatchet

Which one’s you purported.

 

Let me kiss and make up

And should you not repudiate

That you, too

Have to redress the balance

That once we relished.

 

I throw the bread

You caught it,

But can you see my thirst?

Let me drink the sweetest wine

Overflowing from that goblet

You are gripping.

 

I give, you take.

Why not reciprocate?

As this life is a mirror-

You can see who stands in front of it.

 


Let me just unveil this face

So that I could see each break of day

Like the past mornings

As those great paintings

Etched on the walls of my heart

 

If you would only let me know

How could I run away

From  your apathy.




© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

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"Have to redress the balance
That once we relished."
Amazing use of words above. I like the use of language in the poem. Made me desire to read more of your word. Last lines stood out and made the poem complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Amazing words from you also, CP. I also like this piece inspired by a co-writer's work here using id.. read more



Reviews

"Have to redress the balance
That once we relished."
Amazing use of words above. I like the use of language in the poem. Made me desire to read more of your word. Last lines stood out and made the poem complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Amazing words from you also, CP. I also like this piece inspired by a co-writer's work here using id.. read more
Great work, from the following lines "Let us fall upon each other’s neck." "Let me kiss and make up" "I throw the bread" "I give, you take." "Let me just unveil this face" "How could I run away" sounds like hickeys are difficult to hide and show the color of passion, something like that?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Wow! You saw it from my profile page? Thanks a lot!
SquinklaPsyOps

7 Years Ago

Yes, everybody in the network thinks you're awesome, and so do I.
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Oh, I'm flattered. That's so inspiring. Thanks again.
Brilliantly written.
"I give, you take.

Why not reciprocate?" I like that!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Clare.
What a wonderful compositon,loved it :-)


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Talal.
"life is a mirror-

You can see who stands in front of it.




Let me just unveil this face

So that I could see the break of day

Painted in my eyes"
An excellent write and the ending was marvelous...Thank you for sharing ...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Tags: apathy, escape, run away, give-and-take, balance, fairness

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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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