Poem 13. IT'S OVER

Just a thought

I thought the rain won't stop anymore.
But I was wrong.
I opened my window which has been closed for so long,
and there I watch the bright sky with the moon
and those brilliant stars...

The downpour is over.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The rain always comes back... the window is a portal... closed at times and open to let in the new... the moon and sky... and stars... are always changing... giving rebirth...

[Frieda P]

If we allow ourselves to open that window, we get a glimpse of light, uplifting read Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Frieda. :)

[Frieda P]

Is that you on the piano? :-)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

No, dear. I have not much time to play my keyboard these school days.

[gabrielle]

i always believe that the air is at its utmost freshness after a heavy downpour. if that is coupled with the moon and star shining through the night that would make things heavenly. things may end but it would ensue a new beginning.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gab. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Some things come to an end and some must come to an end. You have been waiting patiently for the storm to pass and it did...Hope and perseverance conquered your past...A great write...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Simply and elegantly put - the storm always ends, and the wise are stronger for the weathering... Well penned, Dhaye

[ANTO]

A rebirth Dhaye. What a lovely poem and full of hope.
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[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Anto. :)

[Denham Cole]

Quite happy to have stopped by here.
A refreshing and crisp read.

[Pax]

I always believed that the storm shall pass, and it always do. Like every darkness has always a new dawn in the end.

great poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Pax.

[Pax]

no probs. :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The emotion and message is very clear.

The simplicity of your words is right for this topic.

Very well written and true.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, SquinklaPsyOps. :)