Poem 13.   IT'S OVER

Poem 13. IT'S OVER

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Just a thought

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I thought the rain won't stop anymore.
But I was wrong.
I opened my window which has been closed for so long,
and there I watch the bright sky with the moon
and those brilliant stars...

The downpour is over.


© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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The rain always comes back... the window is a portal... closed at times and open to let in the new... the moon and sky... and stars... are always changing... giving rebirth...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If we allow ourselves to open that window, we get a glimpse of light, uplifting read Dhaye.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Frieda. :)
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Is that you on the piano? :-)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

No, dear. I have not much time to play my keyboard these school days.
i always believe that the air is at its utmost freshness after a heavy downpour. if that is coupled with the moon and star shining through the night that would make things heavenly. things may end but it would ensue a new beginning.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab. :)
Some things come to an end and some must come to an end. You have been waiting patiently for the storm to pass and it did...Hope and perseverance conquered your past...A great write...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Simply and elegantly put - the storm always ends, and the wise are stronger for the weathering... Well penned, Dhaye

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A rebirth Dhaye. What a lovely poem and full of hope.
X

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Anto. :)
Quite happy to have stopped by here.
A refreshing and crisp read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
I always believed that the storm shall pass, and it always do. Like every darkness has always a new dawn in the end.

great poem.



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Pax.
Pax

7 Years Ago

no probs. :)
The emotion and message is very clear.

The simplicity of your words is right for this topic.

Very well written and true.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, SquinklaPsyOps. :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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