Poem 17.   HOMECOMING

Poem 17. HOMECOMING

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

of a wandering mind

"
The bells are ringing
The music is playing
They are all smiling.

"Welcome back, honey!" they say.
"You're so beautiful today.
We're glad you've found out the way."

"I was lost a month or more
Sailing in, can't find the shore
My cabin seems without a door."

"Cheers! You've passed the test.
Come, lay down and rest.
Tomorrow will be the best."





© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Pax
my pretty friend... often times we got lost in our way to home, like there is an endless darkness that you're walking blind... though even in darkness you'll always find light along the way, it just takes time to see through...

cheer, welcome back my pretty friend...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Pax. Baliktad naman ang mundo natin now. Ikaw naman nagmo-motivate sa akin. Rainy season kas.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

this poem takes a positive attitude... hopeful as well...
tag ulan nanaman... :) dito ilang m.. read more



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Pax
my pretty friend... often times we got lost in our way to home, like there is an endless darkness that you're walking blind... though even in darkness you'll always find light along the way, it just takes time to see through...

cheer, welcome back my pretty friend...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Pax. Baliktad naman ang mundo natin now. Ikaw naman nagmo-motivate sa akin. Rainy season kas.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

this poem takes a positive attitude... hopeful as well...
tag ulan nanaman... :) dito ilang m.. read more
Great return with salvo and expressed well, poetized. Nice use of the rhyme scheme.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Wherever you may go, you can't deny who you are ...and you'll surely come back to where you're from... read more
Ency Bearis

7 Years Ago

That's right if the genre is in your blood, it runs to your veins and arteries towards your heart an.. read more
I love how this embodies a teens struggle through depression and finding the light at the end of the tunnel...and going to homecoming with confidence and beauty.
This is just a random online read! I loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha! Teen struggle... I'm not a teenager anymore. Treat me as an old woman here.. which is the trut.. read more
Soleil RunningWild

7 Years Ago

no problem! I am not teenager anymore either.
Warm and inviting....home is where we all long to be. A comforting write filled with familial love. Lydi*

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi*. :)
A great poem on the homecoming front...Thank you for posting...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
Nice poem i must say.......................;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
Wonderfully depicted homecoming in this rhymed piece.
Rhyming three lines stanzas in blue ink charmed my heart and eyes.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, zainul. :)
zainul

7 Years Ago

Welcome,Dhaye.:)

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Added on August 12, 2013
Last Updated on August 18, 2013
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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