Poem 19.  THE WITCH

Poem 19. THE WITCH

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Inspired by DanN's work

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I saw you hitting me again, my peer
Ah, this shouldn't be happening again.
Alas! I have claimed my old broomstick
'Tis the one I am waiting for, my wish
The strength I lost, I have it now
No more tears, I won't bow down
I won't pass through the dusty road
My old broomstick is just so good
Just like before it'll carry me
Fly me away, make me so free.
Who would say that I can go?
I'm once a witch, they do not know.
Yes, I can. I can fly high
I am that witch  who won't just die.
Oh, 'tis my dear broomstick, 'twill carry me
Fly me away, this witch's now free!




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

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I think this poem is about misjudging and bad conceptions where it is all relative whether they call you a witch or bad names you know the truth about them and yourself and don't give a flying stuff about their wicked opinions for you are free from criticism and hurt...Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Wow! Glad you can relate to this piece. Thanks for the visit, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)



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That was a fun read, inspirational as well, a kind of I will not give up statement.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Years Ago

I didn't mean I don't want to make a statement, I mean your poem was a statement of I will not give .. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Ahaha. I'm sorry. I have read your comment in a haste. My poem was an "I-will-not-give-up" statement.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Years Ago

No problem, you are welcome.
I think this poem is about misjudging and bad conceptions where it is all relative whether they call you a witch or bad names you know the truth about them and yourself and don't give a flying stuff about their wicked opinions for you are free from criticism and hurt...Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Wow! Glad you can relate to this piece. Thanks for the visit, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Is it something like a house wife that keeps the house clean and then her husband abuses her and all she needs is her skills to start again and find and make another home with someone else.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SquinklaPsyOps

6 Years Ago

Well, it is a fantasy poem style with words used as a vehicle to fly.
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Nope. That's a metaphor of a woman who have been hurt by others' misconception and is now trying to .. read more
SquinklaPsyOps

6 Years Ago

So then people see her, the character in the poem as a witch that needs a manufactured broom and not.. read more
A great notion into metaphor, well written. Bewitching thoughts, o huwag lang maging aswang.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Ency. You're right, it's a notion to metaphor inspired by a friend's work. Actually, I h.. read more
Ency Bearis

6 Years Ago

That's nice then.

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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