Poem 20.  BROKEN

Poem 20. BROKEN

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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I have this favorite cup, a simple one
Which is so dear  that I simply can't
Leave it in one corner of my chest
Considered it the last, the best
But one day I just found it there
Broken in pieces, drowned me in tears
Fix it, mend it, I really did
But it isn't me who could be that skilled
To make magic of fixing things
Somehow I realized what would it bring
Another cup with new design?
Perhaps I would know if I'll just try...




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Margaux  (Dhaye)
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when something is broken, those scars are left behind, the marks are quite visible. no matter how hard we try, we cab't bring it back to its sublime form as we do don't possess
:"magic of fixing things"...it symbolizes our relationship as well, there's always that knot when we try to join two broken relations together again.

nicely penned with a very wise diction usage. thanks for sharing.


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the insights, Atiba. :)



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when something is broken, those scars are left behind, the marks are quite visible. no matter how hard we try, we cab't bring it back to its sublime form as we do don't possess
:"magic of fixing things"...it symbolizes our relationship as well, there's always that knot when we try to join two broken relations together again.

nicely penned with a very wise diction usage. thanks for sharing.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the insights, Atiba. :)
Wow I found this very symbolic for how when a relationship breaks you can try to mend it but it will never be the same.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you for your interpretation. It could be, but my real take on it is as simple as being at.. read more
Nicely penned, please keep it up....

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Okay, thanks a lot.
ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

You're Welcome
Great write, it's a real feel you converted into words about something your love or did love. Words're powerful and realistic. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, IW. Glad you dropped by. :)
The heart will break but broken live on - Lord Byron.

Opportunity out of disaster Dhaye. A poem that is seeped in life-lessons
Well done
X

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Anto.
try to kill the "I" too much of it can really take its toll... it will sound dry... i know it's not easy to do so, but it makes a huge difference.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

* "Give man a fish and he will live for a day..."
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Pax
I know this feelings, it's hard to fix once something is broken...
and most of the time it will remain broken....
but that doesn't mean you can't buy new one
or create new ones, the new ones that is filled with the same love...

i for one considered myself a broken piece, but i never do show them..
perhaps only in my writes...
what i do is i kept on moving forward...
and always create new memories...
keep it up my friend...
you'll know best when you listen to yourself!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the insight, Pax. I'll remember that.
I like the broken one... has stories to tell... sentimental ones... of course... the new one gives you perceptive to move on and realize things change...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Oh, thank you so much Glen. Glad you can relate with this one.
I love this poem a lot, and I see beauty in imperfection...it's the contemplation of this object and the emotional attachment to it...I truly enjoyed how you emote your feelings on this poem.

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¥ay $wagger

7 Years Ago

Very true...and I respect you provoke such thought and sentiment. Yes, it is exciting to try somethi.. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Oh, yes. You got it. Don't get too attached. Thank you.
¥ay $wagger

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome, Dhaye.

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