Poem 38.   THE STRING

Poem 38. THE STRING

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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And so am I...

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Could you count them?

    the moments I cried in misery
    the minutes  I sighed in discomfort
    the hours I stayed in desolation
    the days I isolated myself from this world
    the weeks I longed for a single word
    the months  I waited for a simple glance
    the times I felt the pain while holding on to the last string of hope

Who can tell?
Nobody could
Even I.

The last string is going to  surrender
And so am I.




*This is the video version of this poem. Hope you'll enjoy watching.
                       ----Dhaye





© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Pax
how very profound...
sometimes you have to give-in in some situation...
there is a difference in giving up from giving-in...
like the lyrics of never let me go by florence + the machine:
"But I'm not giving up, I'm just giving in..."
when the hope is cut, you'll still have your faith on it that it will just go to a better one...

great piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Pax. Actually, I love piano and violin instrumentals. I make sad poems to use the.. read more



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This rope is about to reach its breaking point .
Do we have a contingency plan ¿

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Haha! Neil, Neil. You're being funny in one of my emotional poems here.

Sometimes we .. read more
This one seems to have been written from personal experience, it is so convincing and greatly moving, great work!!

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Pax
how very profound...
sometimes you have to give-in in some situation...
there is a difference in giving up from giving-in...
like the lyrics of never let me go by florence + the machine:
"But I'm not giving up, I'm just giving in..."
when the hope is cut, you'll still have your faith on it that it will just go to a better one...

great piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Pax. Actually, I love piano and violin instrumentals. I make sad poems to use the.. read more

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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