BROKEN WINGS

BROKEN WINGS

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Can I?

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I am a butterfly
Who made a mistake
By entering into your cruel world
And now my wings are broken.
How could I fly again?

I want to escape from this curse
Which I haven't imagined I could be into.
Tell me how.
Give me strength.

Let me fly...

Away.






*This is the video version of this poem. Hope you'll like this.
   ----Dhaye




© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Metaphor
An implied comparison between two unlike things that actually have something important in common.


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Pax
like scars, they all heal....
perhaps you need time for youself to heal...
perhaps the strenght you needed lies withing you...
you just have to see and feel it...

mistakes are a lesson,but they are not meant to over ponder and over think...
a mistake is not a curse, it is just so when you tend to live with it
- like your reminding youself always that you'll always be forever broken...
Like they say: learn from your mistakes...
and with that you'll fly even better when you've healed your broken wings,
i know it may not be the same as before but as long as you know you could still fly... then do it!

great work my pretty friend...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Pax. Another dramatic poem for my video. Thank you so much for the support, my friend. You d.. read more



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Wonderful, I really felt for the poor butterfly, very well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dramatic shifts, good end. You made me proud again, Dhaye. :x

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Blue. Wow! I owe you a lot tonight. I'll check out your works next time, promise. Good night.. read more
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Pax
like scars, they all heal....
perhaps you need time for youself to heal...
perhaps the strenght you needed lies withing you...
you just have to see and feel it...

mistakes are a lesson,but they are not meant to over ponder and over think...
a mistake is not a curse, it is just so when you tend to live with it
- like your reminding youself always that you'll always be forever broken...
Like they say: learn from your mistakes...
and with that you'll fly even better when you've healed your broken wings,
i know it may not be the same as before but as long as you know you could still fly... then do it!

great work my pretty friend...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Pax. Another dramatic poem for my video. Thank you so much for the support, my friend. You d.. read more

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Added on August 24, 2013
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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