FARCICALITY  (Shape Poetry)

FARCICALITY (Shape Poetry)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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A repost

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I walked on a place where I'm not that sure if I'll be comfortable,
with nothing but a thick blindfold. Was it to test my sense or
I am too confident that I can find the best seat for me?

A whisper in my ear simply made me feel at ease
for a while knowing that someone's there by
my side. After some moments the wind
blew and the soft voice was gone.
Only then I noticed, the wind
was my only companion.

And I realized how
farcical I am
hoping
that I
can
hold
the
w
i
n
d

in
my
arms.




© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)



Shape Poetry

Shape Poetry is also associated with Concrete Poetry-

Shape is one of the main things that separate prose and poetry. Poetry can take on many formats, but one of the most inventive forms is for the poem to take on the shape of its subject. Therefore, if the subject of your poem were of a flower, then the poem would be shaped like a flower. If it were of a fish, then the poem would take on the shape of a fish. ><<<*>

Shape and Concrete Poetry go hand-in-hand; however, Concrete or Visual Poetry don’t have to take on the particular shape of the poem’s subject, but rather the wording in the poem can enhance the effect of the words.

Credits to: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/index.html

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Dhaye, this is simply beautiful, reading this made me feel as though
I being captured in flight by the wind, I love the surreal, soft imagery you portrayed
In this write. This poem is a delight for all the senses. Thank you for sharing :)
I very much enjoyed reading this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

BJ, I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for dropping by.
ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

You're very welcomed, Dhaye, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit :)
Looking forward to reading more.. read more



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Oh the final line is simply brilliant and your climatic approach is really brilliant, I do admire the shape and structure too, this poem can be recited really well, I love it dear Dhaye :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye, this is simply beautiful, reading this made me feel as though
I being captured in flight by the wind, I love the surreal, soft imagery you portrayed
In this write. This poem is a delight for all the senses. Thank you for sharing :)
I very much enjoyed reading this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

BJ, I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for dropping by.
ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

You're very welcomed, Dhaye, I thoroughly enjoyed my visit :)
Looking forward to reading more.. read more

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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