Poem 28. A CAKE, A KISS AND A WISH

A cake with a candle

A kiss from you

A simple wish

Are all what I want

Once more

In this another chapter

Of being with you.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Sounds simple enough, one would think anyway, smart, short and to the point.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Frieda. :)

[gabrielle]

cake, kiss and a wish. mmmm.. is someone having a birthday? short and sweet ...^__^...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. Medyo napapaaga ang pasok natin sa "klase" ha? Thanks for considering this as "sweet" (dahil sa cake?) LOl

[gabrielle]

"klase" hahaha. multi-tasking as usual. lol. sana blueberry cheesecake yan. yummy!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Pampataba ang cake. Haha. Maganda lang yan para makapag-wish. LOL

[Tom]

So short but says so much, not an easy task but this is perfectly adorable !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I don't expect that this simple piece will get any review. LOL. I just have to let my thoughts out about a coming event in my life.
Thank you so much, Tom. :)

[Tom]

Dynamite always comes in small packages !!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Now, I have learned something from you. LOL.