Poem 32. A MOTHER'S PERSPECTIVE

I wish...

Watching him sleeping,
I have a moment of reflection
Days had gone so fast
I'm looking at a new generation
I know I'm not the best mom
But I hope I can rear him as a good person
When I am old he can be
The one who won't leave me alone.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Interesting write...for me anyway, as it relates to my situation via somewhat darker highways I won't clutter this page with.
I will say this: not only a nice reflection and glimpse into who you are, but a very necessary thought to tuck away in a quickly-accessible draw of the mind, not in the rear of the storage garage. Important piece,
Thanks for sharing

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Antonyo. :)

[Antoñyo]

You're very welcome

[Lydia Shutter]

Monumentally touching. Filled with hopes and dreams for the future of your child. Every mother who reads your words will be able to relate....I know I did. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Lyd. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I see the heart of a great mom here and the great anticipation of the future...A splendid read and write...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[lee von cleef]

Alone , never, your doubt should be tossed out. There in your mind , your heart caressed in your poem, will rock you again even when you are old,

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Just a simple thought from a mother.
Thanks, Lee.