Poem 33. WILL YOU STILL REMEMBER?

'cause I do

Will you still remember me?

My mulishness and absurdity

Those times I was so free

To ponder, to feel, to hold, to see?

‘Cause I still remember clearly

How I became a casualty

Of a different row between you and me

And yet, I’m not sulky

It’s just the past-  a memory.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a touching poignant write, my friend. When friends have a falling out, it is sometimes difficult to remember the good times, but they are what we should remember. Your words are beautifully written and the graphic you chose to accompany your words is stunning. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for dropping by, Lyd**.

[ms. barrie]

Your words are eloquently pensive, the imagery you conveyed
In this write...poetic loveliness. Thanks for sharing :)

~ Barrie Joy

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit, BJ.

[ms. barrie]

You welcome, Dhaye, :)

[SyberRose]

Lovely melancholy words dhaye...and gorgeous music ...i think i will add it to my profile for a while if you don't mind...Rose:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! First of all, I have to thank you for the visit and such kind words. Second, the music's not mine, so I won't mind. LOL. Credits go to the original creator of it. Glad you like my choice of music. I really like instrumentals specially of piano and violin. Go on, beautiful Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thanks...i have beautiful guitar music on my site too...with violins in the background.:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Your poetry is memorable as you remember the past and chart the future...Bravo

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

A bittersweet remembrance, we keep those close in our hearts to reminisce at will. Lovely music by the way, enjoyed dhaye, as I have many of these...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Frieda. :)

[Antoñyo]

A casual pondering made beautiful and thought-provoking...
I enjoyed this, of course

Thanks for sharing

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Antonyo. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This poem has a charming youthfulness about it, with a good rhyming scheme, recollections can be precious, providing one learns not to dwell on the negatives

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Charming youthfulness...thank you so much, Sheema. :)