Poem 33.  WILL YOU STILL REMEMBER?

Poem 33. WILL YOU STILL REMEMBER?

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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'cause I do

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Will you still remember me?

My mulishness and absurdity

Those times I was so free

To ponder, to feel, to hold, to see?

‘Cause I still remember clearly

How I became a casualty

Of a different row between you and me

And yet, I’m not sulky

It’s just the past-  a memory.

 






© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Such a touching poignant write, my friend. When friends have a falling out, it is sometimes difficult to remember the good times, but they are what we should remember. Your words are beautifully written and the graphic you chose to accompany your words is stunning. Lydi**

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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Thank you for dropping by, Lyd**.



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Such a touching poignant write, my friend. When friends have a falling out, it is sometimes difficult to remember the good times, but they are what we should remember. Your words are beautifully written and the graphic you chose to accompany your words is stunning. Lydi**

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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Thank you for dropping by, Lyd**.
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Your words are eloquently pensive, the imagery you conveyed
In this write...poetic loveliness. Thanks for sharing :)

~ Barrie Joy

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, BJ.
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6 Years Ago

You welcome, Dhaye, :)
Lovely melancholy words dhaye...and gorgeous music ...i think i will add it to my profile for a while if you don't mind...Rose:)

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Haha! First of all, I have to thank you for the visit and such kind words. Second, the music's not m.. read more
SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thanks...i have beautiful guitar music on my site too...with violins in the background.:)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Your poetry is memorable as you remember the past and chart the future...Bravo

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
A bittersweet remembrance, we keep those close in our hearts to reminisce at will. Lovely music by the way, enjoyed dhaye, as I have many of these...

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Frieda. :)
A casual pondering made beautiful and thought-provoking...
I enjoyed this, of course

Thanks for sharing

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Antonyo. :)
This poem has a charming youthfulness about it, with a good rhyming scheme, recollections can be precious, providing one learns not to dwell on the negatives

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Charming youthfulness...thank you so much, Sheema. :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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