Poem 34.  DOMINIQUE

Poem 34. DOMINIQUE

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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I am her voice...

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You came to me like an angel
Yes, to me you were the one
I don't need any man, anymore
Because you're enough for me
To complete my life.

Your cry in the morning
Made me feel alive
Because I know that you ask
For another hug, another touch
So I have to cuddle you in my arms
And that made me happy all the time.

On the third month of your journey
In this cruel world of ours
You felt the pain
But you did not show it to me
All you did was to smile
And so I just hugged you
And sang my song for you.

But I don't know that my song
Would turn into mourning
The sorrow, the grief, the pain
I don't know how I'd scream.
You left me all of a sudden
Without a sign
But a gasp
With an unforgettable  smile.

I did everything to get you back
I cried, I knelt, I bowed down
I plead to everyone
I was like a fool in the street
Just to have you back
But you closed your eyes
And my world turned black
For I knew, it was the end.

You were my angel
And until now, you are.
I don't know if I'm crazy
When I see you as a butterfly.

Here in my heart, you're still alive
And forever will be my angel,
My Dominique...

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A sad and beautiful poem.
"You were my angel
And until now, you are.
I don't know if I'm crazy
When I see you as a butterfly."
People who touch our life. Leave reminisce of things we need to hold on to. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, CP.



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Oh that was so sad, beautiful but very sad. I was never blessed with any children, but I can't imagine the pain of losing one. In some cultures, a butterfly was thought to be the souls of the departed, especially children.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Eddie.
A sad and beautiful poem.
"You were my angel
And until now, you are.
I don't know if I'm crazy
When I see you as a butterfly."
People who touch our life. Leave reminisce of things we need to hold on to. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, CP.
A beautiful and heartfelt poem cascading with great sentiments.We belong to gain as much as to loss in the impermanent as well a the mortal fragility of life...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit and your kind words, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
is this about ur baby? i love it! conveys the joy of motherhood.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

A baby here on earth for sometime but an angel forever...
Thanks for dropping by, thyra. It's .. read more
this reminded me of my sibling's sentiment, "the moment i heard my baby's heartbeat is almost simultaneous with dad's last breath." it had been a consolation for us that although we lose someone we deeply love, a blessing is coming on the way. yet, we experienced pain once again as we lose a future bundle of joy only weeks thereafter. painful piece dhaye but be glad that they are all up there watching all of us down here, making silly of ourselves. lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

"making silly of ourselves..." Seems that you feel me...as having the same undertakings with you. LO.. read more
Many condolences for your loss of your daughter, Dominique, this is a beautiful, heart breaking piece, best wishes to you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

The truth is, I'm writing in different perspectives, Sheema. Yesterday, I'm a naughty guy...today, a.. read more
SHEEMA HUQ

6 Years Ago

Oh I see, a tribute to a special loss, thank you for updating me :)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

This person who's so dear to me has so much stories of pain...and of strength. I admire her for bein.. read more
its beautiful enough to make me cry...superb...
thanks for sharing this awesome write and keep writing...^^
glitchy...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Glitch. I appreciate your kind words.
I have to go now because I have .. read more

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