Poem 36.  Our Song

Poem 36. Our Song

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

in my heart

"


When you sing, I listen carefully
Not merely to your sweet melody
But to the beats of my heart, honey
And for that I feel so heavenly.

        Please don't stop, don't go.
       I have to sing this song for you-
       Our song when I first met you
       At that table for two.


Is it beautiful, my love?
The notes were from my heart
That I don't even know from the start
If you really hear and understand...



© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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A beautiful and hopeful poem. To be able to hear someone you love sing to you. Make your world complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks once more, CP.
This is so lyrical. I get the meter and tune in my head when i read this poem. Excellent :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Shivam. :)
Beautifully spoken with an amorous heart...lovingly penned, Dhaye, I much enjoyed the read. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Everett. :)
Babe Roxx

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome, Dhaye. :)
Beautifully sweet and romantic. Absolutely gorgeous in content and presentation. I love this! :) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Ms. J. :)
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome. My pleasure to read your beautiful poem.
I like these precious notes from a singing heart, lovely work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheema. :)
"The notes were from my heart
That I don't even know from the start
If you really hear and understand..."

This is truly a song of love from the heart and you have done a marvelous job...Will he listen ???

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

I don't know, really. Haha!
Thanks a lot, Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on September 20, 2013
Last Updated on October 5, 2013
Tags: song, duet, love, friend, solo, composition, notes

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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