Poem 36.  Our Song

Poem 36. Our Song

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
"

in my heart

"


When you sing, I listen carefully
Not merely to your sweet melody
But to the beats of my heart, honey
And for that I feel so heavenly.

        Please don't stop, don't go.
       I have to sing this song for you-
       Our song when I first met you
       At that table for two.


Is it beautiful, my love?
The notes were from my heart
That I don't even know from the start
If you really hear and understand...



© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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A beautiful and hopeful poem. To be able to hear someone you love sing to you. Make your world complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks once more, CP.
This is so lyrical. I get the meter and tune in my head when i read this poem. Excellent :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Shivam. :)
Beautifully spoken with an amorous heart...lovingly penned, Dhaye, I much enjoyed the read. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Everett. :)
¥ay $wagger

5 Years Ago

You are most welcome, Dhaye. :)
Beautifully sweet and romantic. Absolutely gorgeous in content and presentation. I love this! :) Julie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Ms. J. :)
MsJewel

5 Years Ago

You are very welcome. My pleasure to read your beautiful poem.
I like these precious notes from a singing heart, lovely work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheema. :)
"The notes were from my heart
That I don't even know from the start
If you really hear and understand..."

This is truly a song of love from the heart and you have done a marvelous job...Will he listen ???

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

I don't know, really. Haha!
Thanks a lot, Sami.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Tags: song, duet, love, friend, solo, composition, notes

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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