Poem 36. Our Song

in my heart

When you sing, I listen carefully
Not merely to your sweet melody
But to the beats of my heart, honey
And for that I feel so heavenly.

        Please don't stop, don't go.
       I have to sing this song for you-
       Our song when I first met you
       At that table for two.

Is it beautiful, my love?
The notes were from my heart
That I don't even know from the start
If you really hear and understand...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. To be able to hear someone you love sing to you. Make your world complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)]

Thanks once more, CP.

[Shivam Murari]

This is so lyrical. I get the meter and tune in my head when i read this poem. Excellent :)

[Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)]

Thanks a lot, Shivam. :)

[¥ay $wagger]

Beautifully spoken with an amorous heart...lovingly penned, Dhaye, I much enjoyed the read. :)

[Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)]

Thanks, Everett. :)

[¥ay $wagger]

You are most welcome, Dhaye. :)

[MsJewel]

Beautifully sweet and romantic. Absolutely gorgeous in content and presentation. I love this! :) Julie

[Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)]

Thanks, Ms. J. :)

[MsJewel]

You are very welcome. My pleasure to read your beautiful poem.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like these precious notes from a singing heart, lovely work.

[Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)]

Thanks, Sheema. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"The notes were from my heart
That I don't even know from the start
If you really hear and understand..."

This is truly a song of love from the heart and you have done a marvelous job...Will he listen ???

[Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)]

I don't know, really. Haha!
Thanks a lot, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)