Poem 63. I AM AFRAID

Poem 63. I AM AFRAID

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Don't leave me here...

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I don't know why I feel this way
I'm too afraid, my dear angel
I feel like I'm alone again
Here in this sad and dark corner.

Is it a bad insight of mine
That you're going to leave this time?
Why do this heart seems want to cry?
Isn't it time to be just fine?

I miss my smile, my precious smile
You brought it back for that short time
We talked a lot, not for awhile
Things seem to be absurd sometime.

When I met you, I was grateful
That an angel has come along
Who'll teach me what is right from wrong
But now that dream has now its doom.

I am afraid, my dear angel
Please hold my hand, don't leave me here.








© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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I like this monologue Dhaye. Instead of formally praying (btw, i read your A Prayer, and it's very heartfelt) i would talk in my mind pretending that i am having deep conversation with the higher being. And your piece resonates some "conversations". the idea of being left behind is not only heartbreaking but likewise terrifying especially so when you are not yet ready to let go.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabrielle

7 Years Ago

Sus. Read and re-read "Just Take Me" baka makatulong. LOL. yay. got so frustrated sa candy crush na.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

*the reason why I made "Just Take Me (There)"
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Bigayan tayo ng life? hehe



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This is amazing. It definitely touched me in a way I wasn't expecting. This piece seems very sad or fearful? But in some ways I can relate. Thank you so much for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by.
I like this monologue Dhaye. Instead of formally praying (btw, i read your A Prayer, and it's very heartfelt) i would talk in my mind pretending that i am having deep conversation with the higher being. And your piece resonates some "conversations". the idea of being left behind is not only heartbreaking but likewise terrifying especially so when you are not yet ready to let go.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabrielle

7 Years Ago

Sus. Read and re-read "Just Take Me" baka makatulong. LOL. yay. got so frustrated sa candy crush na.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

*the reason why I made "Just Take Me (There)"
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Bigayan tayo ng life? hehe
You just created another piece today Ms Dhaye . This is wonderful. Thanks for sharing .
Ms Dhaye why is there a sense of fear in the heart and soul of this poem ?
If an angelic being showed and revealed himself, would it be for keeps ?




Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

:) :) :) :)
Very poignant piece. We need to smile, we need to embrace life more than we do far too often. Good work! Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I miss my smile, my precious smile
You brought it back for that short time
We talked a lot, not for awhile
Things seem to be absurd sometime."

A very sad write. Angels I guess come and go even in dreams. I hope your dreams don't turn to nightmares...Bravo.............:)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Ok. Salamat
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Oh, that's Tagalog/Filipino. I'm impressed.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Hahaha. You are welcome...:)...............

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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