Poem 67.   WAITING

Poem 67. WAITING

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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just another thought

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Wearing my blue dress

I sat near the window

I look again at the wall clock

It’s only 5:32 PM

I have to wait for more hours

Then I smiled

What am I doing?

I am waiting

Ah, I need persistence...


Or else I won't receive a gift.




© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Another of yours I've already read and came back to. This is interesting and reads like a scene in a movie, so easy to imagine, yet sparking more thought and wonder... feels a little different than your normal but that's always a good thing with writing ;-)

Thanks for the share

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

" feels a little different than your normal " LOL. What's that normal about me? I just write in diff.. read more
Antoñyo

6 Years Ago

"what's normal...?" You sound like me.
Not different in style but in feel...perhaps it's MY.. read more



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Another of yours I've already read and came back to. This is interesting and reads like a scene in a movie, so easy to imagine, yet sparking more thought and wonder... feels a little different than your normal but that's always a good thing with writing ;-)

Thanks for the share

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

" feels a little different than your normal " LOL. What's that normal about me? I just write in diff.. read more
Antoñyo

6 Years Ago

"what's normal...?" You sound like me.
Not different in style but in feel...perhaps it's MY.. read more
Lol .. Nice work once again. It's a very lovely poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neon

6 Years Ago

Welcome .. Well, I can understand the feelings of awaiting for someone (through this simple poem)..... read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

lol. Of course with excitement. You're waiting because you want that thing or person you're waiting .. read more
Neon

6 Years Ago

Lol .. your very funny .. lol you really chuckled on yer this great comment. . . lol
Patience is a virtue !

A poem with a pleasant character !

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Precisely. Thanks, Tom.
Nothing as beautiful as a lady in wait. I like the description. Gave life to the artwork and the purpose of this poem. I like the way you closed the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Yes, most of the time people lose persistence which is an important factor in achieving one's goal.<.. read more

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Added on October 27, 2013
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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