GUIDE ME

GUIDE ME

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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on the things I don't know

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I don't know how to read
Through the depths of one's soul
I don't know how to hear
A veritable call.

I don't know how to catch
When somebody throws a thing
I don't know how to show
All my sincerest feelings.

I don't know how to refuse
When a good friend would ask
I don't know how to prove
Why I keep my trust.

I don't know how I fall
Though it's a silly thing
I don't know but I want
To sing and dance in the rain.

Oh, dear Lord I don't know
Why I'm so weak and frail
I ask Your guiding hands
Be the light to my way.









© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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This is such an innocent and gentle poem. Your delicate words almost sing off the page. Sometimes we know we can not be the ones to walk through this life with all the harshness out there... we are frail and can not see the entire picture. Or the depths and nature of a soul...the ones to trust and those to avoid. But there is always the one who does know all this. To give Him all of us and let Him guide us like a cotton seed in the wind...well that is the best feeling, knowing we are completely taken care of and loved...never to be guided wrong. Gorgeous write, Dhaye... needed to read this today... thank you for sharing your beautiful heart here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Kalypso.



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This is indeed, fantastic i really enjoyed the read, and i was indeed moved, great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Your prayer has been answered, I am moved by this write.and the song with it. The feelings you expressed are sincere. It is good to be honest to oneself and to God.God knows all our needs,but he likes to hear us speak to him.It is good to do an introspection on oneself on a daily basis. I have a fresh day and a fresh start with this piece.God bless great writer..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Rose. :)
Rose of many colours

7 Years Ago

You are great
Like a delicate flower the stem becomes stronger as the summer sun brings forth resilience and beauty!

A soulful, confidence building poem, sublimely conveyed !

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A heartfelt prayer. Soft and delicate emotions decorate this page....so lovely. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi.
Your voice is magical , your soul is delicate and your mind is inquisitive ...:).............

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

:).........................
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha! Can't post with a smiley only? Thank the dots/periods. LOL
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)................
I see how the music being attached becoming epidemic.
I do not know what made you said that first stanza for you can read through the depth of one's soul, you've got just to believe that you do, Dhaye. It is also evident in your series of poem lately, how you yearn to dance in the rain. Intriguing who the rain is, really though I am taking this as an another prayer from the depth of your heart...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Another prayer, Ms. Belle. This will go to my book VOICE OF FAITH.

"Dancing in the rai.. read more
This is very lovely dhaye, each of those stanzas could stand on their own and have their own distinct voice...brava!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, Frieda. Glad you like this.

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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