Poem 47.   CAGED

Poem 47. CAGED

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
"

There's nothing we can do.

"

 

 

No matter how I feel

No matter what is real

We never have a deal

And nothing more to seal.

 

You know all what I know

You feel what I feel, too

We tried so hard to go

But none of us can do.

 

We’re stuck in where we stand

We can’t move hand in hand

We’re like but lost commands

Both caged in our own bands.



© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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So true and well spoken. How come we have not a deal is a good question for lovers. Everything in place , the stars are lined up ( metaphorically speaking ) , the time is ripe but you ask him how come we don't have a deal to seal...Brilliant...:)..........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. You have nice idea. But actually my lines are:
"How come we have a deal
Wh.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)...............



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I loved this, it's seemed like a cool song. I love the rhyme you used into the piece. Well done. Your now increasing yer skills .. keep on.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neon

6 Years Ago

Lol .. oh i meant .. your reaching out .. i didn't mean to .. i know your already well developed :P<.. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Sorry, it's not what I mean. I just thought this piece is the simplest one among the new 5 art.. read more
Neon

6 Years Ago

Thanks dear, Dhaye, I love reading your coolio stuffs :)
Very frustrating indeed when our hands are tied, while others so less worthy sit on the thrones of power!

A creatively stimulating and thought provoking piece of poetic writing !

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, Tom.
yeah..no one can walk away from their story...have to be brave and win the race...
nice one^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Glitch.
So true and well spoken. How come we have not a deal is a good question for lovers. Everything in place , the stars are lined up ( metaphorically speaking ) , the time is ripe but you ask him how come we don't have a deal to seal...Brilliant...:)..........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. You have nice idea. But actually my lines are:
"How come we have a deal
Wh.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)...............

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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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