Poem 68.  I'M YOUR FRIEND

Poem 68. I'M YOUR FRIEND

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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rain or shine

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We often talk like we knew each other well
Hence we used to greet, to pray, to wish, to feel
Those emotions shared- the joy, the tears, the gloom
You are my closest friend in this cluttered room.

I prayed for your sake for I just always know
How you lived in sadness though you didn't show
You always uplift, inspire, and try to heal
While hiding your eyes, someone could see and feel.

I hope you win all the battles you might face
You are that strong, I know you can win the race
You gave me strength, for alone I couldn't make
Now, I wish, I hope, I do pray for your sake.

Don't worry, my friend, I'll be here by your side
I'll be a friend, even there's change of tide
In this distance, rain or shine, I am your friend
I'll care, I'll stay, and  I'll  be here 'til the end.


© 2014 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Don't worry, my friend, I'll be here by your side
I'll be a friend, even there's change of tide
In this distance, rain or shine, I am your friend
I'll care, I'll stay, and I'll be here 'til the end.... it's a cool phrase.

I enjoyed reading the piece, you made a cool piece again as you always do make. Theme's cool and the color of red again spread the scent of love everywhere. Keep on dear, Dhaye :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Neon.
Neon

6 Years Ago

My pleasure as always dear, Dhaye.



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A touching, warm write...but I expect nothing less from you.
You have a beautiful soul.
Bless you.

Scott

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, my friend. Always smile =)
This is a very nice friend tribute. Good one dhaye

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Cassie. :)
A tribute indeed to human kindred spirit !

So poetically and soulfully penned !

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Tom. I'm always grateful with your visit.
Don't worry, my friend, I'll be here by your side
I'll be a friend, even there's change of tide
In this distance, rain or shine, I am your friend
I'll care, I'll stay, and I'll be here 'til the end.... it's a cool phrase.

I enjoyed reading the piece, you made a cool piece again as you always do make. Theme's cool and the color of red again spread the scent of love everywhere. Keep on dear, Dhaye :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Neon.
Neon

6 Years Ago

My pleasure as always dear, Dhaye.
You're from a different place
And I'm from another time
If loneliness has been my portion
In this life...then
Perhaps in some other place
Or somewhere in time
I'll find this friendship divine...

The Lonely Sparrow

This is awesome Dhaye! This is not a " Fair Weather Friendship " type of piece. I love this poem Dhaye. Its like your other poem " First Flight " ... You are really and truly showing your greatest asset in this piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Neil.

I love my friends...
in the real world,
as they helped me d.. read more
Friendship is lovely and so was this poem...great work!(:

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks .

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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