Poem 70.   I WANT TO EAT

Poem 70. I WANT TO EAT

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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I want to eat anything
Without control, without choosing
I want to chew, I want everything
Just to fill up this stomach which is aching.

I want to eat anything
But I am afraid to return to beginning
When I almost get ill because of dieting
And my effort will just go to nothing.

I want to eat anything
And so I have to do something
To fill this stomach which is now aching
Ah, fake hunger, they say, so I must rely on drinking.

Yes, drinking,  but not what you are thinking
I have to drink water before I can't control this craving...


© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
Just sharing an experience....

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"Yes, drinking, but not what you are thinking"..... HAHAH funny line ..
I know very well dear, Dhaye .. your talking about having some water with food.. by the way, what you thinking, you meant.. yu wishing to have some drink? lol HAHAH

Oh dear, now don't make me more hungry .. lol i meant, as of this moment, am too damn hungry and i want to have some stuffs too. Your this write raising my appetite more .. lol

Nice one, you've brilliantly shared your experience .. Thanks for sharing on the site :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon. :)



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It is really hard to try to get out all the weight you have put in but as you said water really helps.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Cassie. :)
I want to eat, but no food, :) very personal and funny. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Marc. Welcome back (I always welcome you when you're back here). LOL
"Yes, drinking, but not what you are thinking"..... HAHAH funny line ..
I know very well dear, Dhaye .. your talking about having some water with food.. by the way, what you thinking, you meant.. yu wishing to have some drink? lol HAHAH

Oh dear, now don't make me more hungry .. lol i meant, as of this moment, am too damn hungry and i want to have some stuffs too. Your this write raising my appetite more .. lol

Nice one, you've brilliantly shared your experience .. Thanks for sharing on the site :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon. :)
They say drinking a glass of water before every meal will help curb the appetite. Not sure that really works, but it is worth a try. It is admirable to try to stay fit and be on a diet regimen, but certainly not easy. Wouldn't it be lovely to eat anything you wanted and never have to worry about weight gain, cholesterol, or other problems? I can identify with your words. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Lyd. :)
Just moments before,I felt hungry and wanted to eat anything.
Very nice work,dhaye.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Haha! I'm like playing here, zainul. Challenging myself to make a poem in 5 minutes or less. And I d.. read more
zainul

6 Years Ago

I am very happy that we thought about eating at the same time.
It is indeed a nice coincidence.. read more

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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