Poem 48.   OUR TIME

Poem 48. OUR TIME

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
"

is precious

"


Our time is so precious
And I don't want to waste
A single moment
Without thinking of you
Where are you now?
What you are doing?
Are you fine?

Then my prayer has been answered
I just wished for a word
But you sent enough for me
And now I'm fine
I will live peacefully
Each precious moment
Thinking about you.

I really care
Because I'm a true friend
In this limited time
Of ours.



© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)
When you don't know what had happened to a friend after some weeks of having no communication, won't you worry? I did...because I really care for my friend.

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This is so very sweet. Of course we worry when we don't hear from friends...or family. Sometimes a simple "I'm okay" in an email is all we need to rest easy. I am glad you found out all is well. The comradery and caring in this poem is heartwarming. Lydi**

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

"A simple 'I'm okay' in an email is all we need to rest easy". Yes, it's true, Lydi. I truly care fo.. read more



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I will live peacefully
Each precious moment
Thinking about you... good lines.

Yeah, everybody does care especially those who do care of frnds as you do yourse .. Nice write, it's came from the depth of the heart. Keep writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon.
This is so very sweet. Of course we worry when we don't hear from friends...or family. Sometimes a simple "I'm okay" in an email is all we need to rest easy. I am glad you found out all is well. The comradery and caring in this poem is heartwarming. Lydi**

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

"A simple 'I'm okay' in an email is all we need to rest easy". Yes, it's true, Lydi. I truly care fo.. read more
The worry , the anxiousness , the dreadful anticipation are all powerful to overwhelm our minds and cause our fears and then every moment and second of time count...A simple but powerful poem...:).....................

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................

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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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