AT LAST (Rhyme)

I'm done!

At last...at last!
The storm has passed
I'm free, I'm free
I shall thank thee
Thy labor met
The price for sweat
To dream a dream
'Twas not so gleam
But in the end
The fear was healed
Oh, thou eyes shine
The peace was mine!

Author's Note

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Always worth it to dream a dream. Storms will come into our lives...real or metaphoric....but we can get past them. They will not last for an eternity. Overcoming fear is a giant step in the right direction. Peace....we all strive for it in our hearts. Very emotive. Well written. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much. I attached here the photo about our 20th Founding Anniversary when I acted as the chairman. I considered it a storm because of the big responsibility I have shouldered for 2 months preparation until it happened. I'm the youngest Chairman in the history of our school and lots of pressure and stressful moments I have encountered from planning, directing people/committees and the implementation of the planned activities for 3 days and 2 nights celebration. At last, I'm done with my duty and the event was successful.

[Lydia Shutter]

Congratulations! Yes, that would be like a storm in your life, absolutely!

[Neon]

Congratulations!

Am glad to hear the storm's been gone now ... and your safe and free to fly up in the sky freely. Keep smiling and of course flying. I enjoyed reading this poem you made. I loved the colors you poured into the words to praise the beauty of the poem more.

[MichaelsLyric.com]

This piece is so happy. It is also a testament to all of your talents. Some people shine so bright, that success has no choice but to come before them. Beautiful piece. Keep shining )

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Michael.

[Tom]

Thankfully the storm has passed and you have become all the wiser and stronger for the experience!

A pleasurable and thoughtful poetic analysis !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much,Tom.