DROWNING  (Senryu)

DROWNING (Senryu)

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
"

a senryu

"


Much suffocated
I can't breathe or see you here
Save me from drowning.





© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)
Senryu
A short Japanese style poem, similar to haiku in structure that treats human beings rather than nature.

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Very nice, I was drawn to the title, as I had an idea for a poem with the same topic. Good job, I love your Senryus.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Eddie. Written last November. I just made it as a chapter to be included in my book "Poetry .. read more
OMG! What a stunning women inside the ocean... hey!
is she alive ..please tell her .. am coming to save her
Don't take tension, am made for her
tell her she's damn beautiful just as an angel
OMG! Her scent's driving me now crazy ... please call her! Ha!

Hey, Dhaye, if you know that stunning woman who's standing the middle of the water then please give her my cafe's site address and tell her also that am a prince of her dreams.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

You're funny, Neon. I have a moving piece here but you're joking. Thanks for the visit.
Neon

6 Years Ago

Ha! yeah.. I was kidding but yeah, i really enjoyed the poem. OMG! In front of the beauty of that bl.. read more
I'm drowning in those words and emotions...Bravo..........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................

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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

Philippines



About
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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