EXODUS

A Senryu

Give me the last key
I'm just too tired of dancing
Let me find the door.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

key, tired of dancing and the door...you've made it just wonderful and amazing my friend.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, glitch. :)

[Tom]

An escape or release to freedom perhaps ?

And a nice accompanying soundtrack too boot !!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! You visited all the "open rooms of my house" today, Tom. Thanks for that.

[Tom]

And thanks for your hospitality Dhaye !

[Sami Khalil]

That is when someone had enough and are ready to depart from it all...You have captured it wonderfully...:).............

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the insights, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking it sounds as if someone has finally had enough and they have given up.You portray a lot with your few words.I really like it:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

We can't control what has to happen, Vidya. Thanks for dropping by on my page.

[Vidya Bacchus]

you are most welcome:)