Poem 59.  PLEASE TELL ME

Poem 59. PLEASE TELL ME

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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My muse doesn't fail me...even with a somber one.

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Am I still a friend
Or you don't know me now?
Please tell me how you've changed
Can you please tell me why?

Am I still the light
That one that shines out through
Or am I now the shade
That covers your milieu?

I fear that you want now
To throw me there away
But you just don't know how
To find the words to say.

Oh, please be true to me
Just hurt me now, please do
Can't you hear, can't you see
There's more pain if it grow.

I'll stand here to accept
I'll wait here for your call
That sad goodbye I wept
The time I wrote my fall...







© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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To tell you something I consider it that you are still my friend. Why are asking this question ? Just asking your question. Ooooops I thought this is not a poem, that's why I answer that way. ( Just Kidding ). A great inquisitive poem and well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Hehe. You made me smile in this very emotional poem of mine, Sir Ency. Thank you po. =)



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To tell you something I consider it that you are still my friend. Why are asking this question ? Just asking your question. Ooooops I thought this is not a poem, that's why I answer that way. ( Just Kidding ). A great inquisitive poem and well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Hehe. You made me smile in this very emotional poem of mine, Sir Ency. Thank you po. =)
I can really relate to this. It hurts to lose people who you were once close to. And often, after feeling separated or avoided from someone, all you want to know is why. I felt this was the strong emotion in your poem. Like you were begging. Very well done, Dhaye!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Michael.
Better to be open and honest with someone rather than keep up a facade !

A heartfelt bittersweet poetic tale, well versed & rhymed to make it an all round telling piece of literature !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Yes, a bittersweet tale, Tom. This is applicable to many...
Thanks a lot.
Very sad..I do understand..it's not easier to get hurt early in a relationship..but it's harder to cure the pain after a long relationship.
I felt your anxiety...

Scott

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for feeling me here...I appreciate your kind words.
Nice pic...matches the poem. I could feel the hurt through this one.....well done my friend. Keep smiling.......=)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Night.
I'll stand here to accept
I'll wait here for your call
That sad goodbye I wept
The time I wrote my fall...



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. This is your 2nd comment in this piece. LOL
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
I have learnt a new word, milieu

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks to me..thanks to you.
I understand the poem. We lose people and we don't know why? A sad goodbye will stay with us forever. I look back in time and wonder how I lost so many good friends. I enjoyed the poem. Made me ponder things this early morning. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
Poignant beautiful write . Love these two lines particularly
Or am I now the shade
That covers your milieu?



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Moon.
A really good poem and pic of you ...I feel you have so much serenity...Bravo....................

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

A passing thought can serve as a muse to make a piece like this. Applicable to some...
Thank y.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................

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