THE CRUSH (Rhyme)

From a man's point of view.

I met her in a bar
Somewhere not so far
She's pretty in her boots
Her skin looks so smooth.

She doesn't speak too much
Her eyes could talk a lot
Her body sways with grace
Oh, I am really amazed!

She's pretty, I like her
I see her everywhere
Inside my mind and in my heart
She's there from the very start.

Author's Note

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[Louvegrise14]

It's amazing how you can get inside a man's head and tell a story so convincingly through his perspective, really good poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, girl!

[MAC]

great description of a crush. excellent write

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Mark.

[Coyote Poetry]

Woman can get into a man's head if they desire. Nice description create good visions and places. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, CP. =)

[gabrielle]

They say that men fall in love with their eyes while women with their ears. =). physical appearance is the first thing that attracts them... =)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Men fall in love more with the physical appearance, while women fall in love with the words? LOL. Its not always about physical appearance because sometimes the saying that "love is blind" is true. Itanong mo pa kay lolo. Hehe. =)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Gab. BTW, nice avatar.

[Sami Khalil]

You write from all points of views. Amazed and dazed...Bravo..........................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Actually, I was here yesterday at the site for more than 5 hours but I have done nothing but to re-read my fave pieces. It's writer's block once again. I tried to make a simple one. Glad that I met a new lady friend here at that time so it motivated me to write something like this about a pretty girl.
Thanks a lot, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

I see ...You are welcome...:)......................