ONE DAY (Free Verse)

A response poem to Neil Aranda's "WEEDS”

I was once a plant, a kind of my own
Oh, a plant that was not eagerly sown
And from that infertile soil, I have grown
Like a weed in wilderness, just unknown.

My ancestors treat me like I'm nothing
Nobody cares if I have done something
But still I don't want to stop believing
Persist to live through hoping and dreaming.

And then they call me as a wild flower
Condemn me like I'm a serial killer
They provoke each other as believer
Each one must be an active decrier.

But one day, my kind will be recognized
As that one good plant, a kind which is nice

From this barren land, I promise, I’ll rise

And I’ll be that strong, one day I’ll be wise…

Author's Note

Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

Reviews

[gabrielle]

Being sown in infertile ground could produce a resilient and strong plant. Wonderful piece. i'm in "hibernating mode". this came out after reading your piece:

And I am a seed
Thrown in the land
of rain and chills
I shall hibernate
And wait for that right moment
to spread my tiny leaves
and shine...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Oh, I'm in hibernating mode also. I like that mode. LOL. It gives me peace of mind and more freedom. It makes my world wider...with bigger space to move on.

Nice response poem of yours.

Thank you so much, my dear Gab.

[NeiL ArandA]

I like this modified version Dhaye....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Neil. Happy New Year to you.