AND IF (Couplets)

A response poem to Night’s “Loves Caress" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Poet_Night/1108222/

And if we meet shall we renew
Our love that's sweet like morning dew

And if we meet with love so pure
I'll never go, my love, for sure

Two hearts aflame with deeper love
A love so pure, as white as dove

And if true love should find us here
Hold me so close, don't leave me, dear.

For we could dance with hearts entwined
We sing our song as love's our bind.

                         

And if these things won’t be the same

Just like that of a precious dream

 

And if my love our time is through

I’ll set you free, I'll let you go.

Author's Note

Couplet. This type of poem is two lines which may be rhymed or unrhymed.
This poem has 7 couplets.

Reviews

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

The last two lines are powerful. you could write an entirely new poem about when you love someone but they can no longer return your feelings. it hurts but you must respect their wish. those last 2 lines really stood out for me and though i enjoyed the previous lines i thought those last 2 really finished the poem of nicely great write.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you. That's because those previous lines you are referring to are somewhat related to the poem of Night where I've got my inspiration in writing this. This is only a response poem, something written when I made a comment in his (Night) poem. The last two couplets were purely mine.
Thank you, Matt.

[annabellee]

This brought a smile to my face. What a lovey and sweet write :)
Happy new year!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Anna.

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Tom]

Unconditional love with no strings attached attached, indeed I do concur, it doesn't get any better than that !

As sweet as honey !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

We cannot hold everything in our own hands. "If you love something, set it free. If it comes back, it is yours. If it doesn't, it never was."
Thank you for the kind words, Tom.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such understanding and love throughout this write. A love that does not imprison, but sets the person free. A love that brings peace along with desire and does not bind with responsibility. Dh, your words rhyme beautifully and they leave me with a sweet feeling. So lovely. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Lydi.