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I ONLY WANT (Free Verse)

I ONLY WANT (Free Verse)

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Thanks to Chris for some help in making this piece better.

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I only want to stay as your friend
If not forever
Then for a lifetime.

I only want to feel that it's you
Who holds my hand to guide me
When I'm in the darkest part of my journey
Be my light
And my shelter
My strength to carry on
When  the road seems too rough.

I only want to hear your words
As my inspiration
For the courage to move on
Even when I have to climb a peak
There's no doubt
Because I know you're here
(Where your words reside)
In my heart and mind.

I only want to make you feel
That I'm just here for you
To stay as your friend
Wishing the best things for you.

I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't care anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if it would hurt me.

All I want is the best for you
And I hope
That you can see that
Because I...
I am your true friend
No matter what.

And when the tests come along the way
I hope I could be strong enough
To hold on to that friendship.

I have loosen my grip for a moment
But I promise...


I'll just remember your words
And things will be alright.





© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)



Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

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"I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't need me anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if they would hurt me."

i remember my science subject on symbiotic relationship: mutualism and parasitism. ideally, friends help each other and they benefit from each other (mutualism). if a person kept on benefiting from the other without returning the favor that in the long-run harmed the latter...i call that kind of relationship as parasitism...i hope i won't have a parasite friend. lol...

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

hahaha, wala na yung lagari, naging scrap kasi kulang sa talim...hehe.. joke lng dhaye..
bawas.. read more
gabrielle

6 Years Ago

hahaha. ang kulit.
shhhh...ako yung bagong gising...tinago ko kalahati ng face kasi may mark .. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

. LOL



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"(Where your words reside)
In my heart and mind." LOVED these words, within a whole collection of words here I loved.

Instant favorite; signed, sealed and delivered to my "forever place" (100/100)

Thanks for the awesome share!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for spending your time in this piece, A. I really appreciate it. =)
True love embodies selflessness, you gave that beautiful life with these words. Great piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, PH. =)
Inspiration is where we find it ...more should cherish their source.



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for dropping by and sharing your thoughts, Chris.
WOW!!!!!!!!!! that lovely, life is a journey! SOOO touching thank you for your writings. it opened that belief of mine that a relationship should always be with a friend a best friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, MB. Indeed life is a journey...and to find someone as a true friend along the way is such.. read more
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Hold on to whatever is worth holding on to, be it a minimal of what you originally wanted but even a small piece of something is better than nothing. Friendship is the most valuable treasure in life, it makes us who we are and how we turn out to be in the future. It's a major part of life and I love this piece all about holding on to that aspect.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I'm 55 years old. I learn good friends are the gold in a life. Few people hang with us for a lifetime. I like the story and the reason for the poem. Good friends are on hand when needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, CP. =)
I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't need me anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if they would hurt me.
for a friend you does your best... very lovely your poetry is... nice of your pen...love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Saddam

6 Years Ago

you are welcome dear.
Your poems are so uplifting and so positive and I always find good lessons and peaceful gestures to enlighten us deeply...Another great one...:)..................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Haha! I don't think so. I have posted a dark poem and another one with sarcasm...but there are lesso.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

OK. You are welcome...:)....................
"I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't need me anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if they would hurt me."

i remember my science subject on symbiotic relationship: mutualism and parasitism. ideally, friends help each other and they benefit from each other (mutualism). if a person kept on benefiting from the other without returning the favor that in the long-run harmed the latter...i call that kind of relationship as parasitism...i hope i won't have a parasite friend. lol...

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

hahaha, wala na yung lagari, naging scrap kasi kulang sa talim...hehe.. joke lng dhaye..
bawas.. read more
gabrielle

6 Years Ago

hahaha. ang kulit.
shhhh...ako yung bagong gising...tinago ko kalahati ng face kasi may mark .. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

. LOL
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Pax
I was eating my sandwich as I read this, and I almost choke on it because of this two lines: (LOL)

If not forever
Then for a lifetime.

Smiling here. So I can’t help but give you my thoughts my friend… It’s really cute and sweet. I really do know how much you value friendship and with that – I truly see it here in this piece. Now I think, nakunsinsya tuloy ako, babawasan ko na yung mga sermon ko,LOL, tahimik nalng ako para sayo… but know that, when a friend is in need, I'll help whenever I can...


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Basahin mo ang last comment ko sa review ni Gab. Binanggit kita. Baka isipinmo traidor akong lola. P.. read more
Pax

6 Years Ago

wala nang sungay si halimaw, mabait na yun...hehe... nakalbo na nga sa kakaputol sa sungay...hehe
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Ah, basta ipag-pray nyo ang students ko kukuha ng assessment next week tapos yung laban namin sa Reg.. read more

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