I ONLY WANT (Free Verse)

Thanks to Chris for some help in making this piece better.

I only want to stay as your friend
If not forever
Then for a lifetime.

I only want to feel that it's you
Who holds my hand to guide me
When I'm in the darkest part of my journey
Be my light
And my shelter
My strength to carry on
When  the road seems too rough.

I only want to hear your words
As my inspiration
For the courage to move on
Even when I have to climb a peak
There's no doubt
Because I know you're here
(Where your words reside)
In my heart and mind.

I only want to make you feel
That I'm just here for you
To stay as your friend
Wishing the best things for you.

I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't care anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if it would hurt me.

All I want is the best for you
And I hope
That you can see that
Because I...
I am your true friend
No matter what.

And when the tests come along the way
I hope I could be strong enough
To hold on to that friendship.

I have loosen my grip for a moment
But I promise...

I'll just remember your words
And things will be alright.

Author's Note

Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

Reviews

[gabrielle]

"I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't need me anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if they would hurt me."

i remember my science subject on symbiotic relationship: mutualism and parasitism. ideally, friends help each other and they benefit from each other (mutualism). if a person kept on benefiting from the other without returning the favor that in the long-run harmed the latter...i call that kind of relationship as parasitism...i hope i won't have a parasite friend. lol...

[gabrielle]

how can i edit my comment? it doesn't make sense. lol

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, I also know that. I also remember my Biology subject in high school, the subject which is my favorite because I am free to read a pocketbook inserted in my workbook. The teacher smiles at me because she can see me reading the workbook (as it seems, the truth is I level the workbook to cover my face while I'm reading the pocketbook).LOl.

Parasite friend...LOL. Two people become friends because they really benefit from each other, either in terms of material, emotional or spiritual aspect/help.

I also wish you won't have that kind of friend. I'm confident enough to say that my friend is not a parasite type (either me), as I have mentioned in the 2nd and 3rd verses.

You and Pax are similar in some aspects...

Thanks for the remarkable review, Gab. I really appreciate it. =)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

May sense naman. Ikaw lagi kang ganyan. Lagi kang nakokonsensya sa mga review mo sa akin? Hehe. Nakikita mo yung pencil sa pagitan ng flag or like or ano bay yun...di ko kasi madescribe. Basta yung pencil, yun ang edit.

[gabrielle]

ah, ok. no one is a parasite naman..nag-exaggerate lang...=)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Mana ka sa lola mo...exaggerated ka rin. LOL

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Bakit di ka makatingin sa akin ng diretso? Nahihiya ka sa akin, noh? Ah, nakayuko pala ako. Ako pala ang nahihiya sa iyo. Si Pax naman, mukhang bagong gising na walang makitang suklay, ngkakamot pa ng ilong. Hehehe. Tingnan ko lang pag di nagdala ng lagari yan at kahapon pa nyan gustong putulin ang sungay ng kalabaw. Hehehe

Joke joke joke din pag may time...

[Pax]

hahaha, wala na yung lagari, naging scrap kasi kulang sa talim...hehe.. joke lng dhaye..
bawas bawasan na yung sermonan... hehe

[gabrielle]

hahaha. ang kulit.
shhhh...ako yung bagong gising...tinago ko kalahati ng face kasi may mark pa ng laway (lol. yuck)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

. LOL

[Antoñyo]

"(Where your words reside)
In my heart and mind." LOVED these words, within a whole collection of words here I loved.

Instant favorite; signed, sealed and delivered to my "forever place" (100/100)

Thanks for the awesome share!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for spending your time in this piece, A. I really appreciate it. =)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

True love embodies selflessness, you gave that beautiful life with these words. Great piece.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, PH. =)

[Chris]

Inspiration is where we find it ...more should cherish their source.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much for dropping by and sharing your thoughts, Chris.

[mournful bear]

WOW!!!!!!!!!! that lovely, life is a journey! SOOO touching thank you for your writings. it opened that belief of mine that a relationship should always be with a friend a best friend.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, MB. Indeed life is a journey...and to find someone as a true friend along the way is such a blessing.

[>.]

Hold on to whatever is worth holding on to, be it a minimal of what you originally wanted but even a small piece of something is better than nothing. Friendship is the most valuable treasure in life, it makes us who we are and how we turn out to be in the future. It's a major part of life and I love this piece all about holding on to that aspect.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm 55 years old. I learn good friends are the gold in a life. Few people hang with us for a lifetime. I like the story and the reason for the poem. Good friends are on hand when needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot, CP. =)

[Saddam]

I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't need me anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if they would hurt me.
for a friend you does your best... very lovely your poetry is... nice of your pen...love this.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much!

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear.

[Sami Khalil]

Your poems are so uplifting and so positive and I always find good lessons and peaceful gestures to enlighten us deeply...Another great one...:)..................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! I don't think so. I have posted a dark poem and another one with sarcasm...but there are lessons in there, too. Somehow, through the dark, I want others to see the light. Reverse psychology as what they say.

Thanks for the kind words, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)....................

[Pax]

I was eating my sandwich as I read this, and I almost choke on it because of this two lines: (LOL)

If not forever
Then for a lifetime.

Smiling here. So I can’t help but give you my thoughts my friend… It’s really cute and sweet. I really do know how much you value friendship and with that – I truly see it here in this piece. Now I think, nakunsinsya tuloy ako, babawasan ko na yung mga sermon ko,LOL, tahimik nalng ako para sayo… but know that, when a friend is in need, I'll help whenever I can...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe! Familiar lines? See, I'm a good learner. But sometimes sensitive, so "you better watch out you better not cry, you better not pout I'm telling you why", your lola will walk out of town...if you'll always make "Sermon on the Mount". LOL

Ha! almost choked? You made me laugh, baby boy! You're multitasking again...eating while reading. LOL

Thanks, at least now you have that blessing that I can run to you whenever I need you. Paano? Pag tumambling ang lola at nabalian ng buto, kaya mo akong tulungan? Hehehe.

[Pax]

hahaha, naging kanta.. :D
multitasking nga...almost choked, wala pa naman akong tubig sa tabi ko..hehe, buti nlng almost lang :D kailangan komain, nakakagutom kaya mag isip nang malalalim..hehe, may binabasa kasi akong profound pieces ngayon..hehe

segi no probs, basta kailangan ko munang mag aral nang konting physical theraphy at massage para ma ayos yung nabali... :D

welcome!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Profound pieces ha? Kailan kaya magiging profound ang pieces ko? Masaya naman ang lola kasi 2 apo ang nakausap ko this day. Kanina, si Gab naman. Cge, go back to your seat, but do not cheat, ha? Hehe. Minus 10 yan...

[Pax]

Profounity depends on how far your mind goes, so it depends on the person who reads it... profound naman yung mga pieces mo ah...

hehe, minus ka agad, hehe

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. Ganon talaga. Panakot ba. Ikaw nga, cheater ka pagdating sa challenge natin...Doble lagi bilang mo sa points mo, sa akin isa lang...Bakit pagdating sa sungay, doble din ang sungay ng halimaw, sa kalabaw, isa lang? Hehehe

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Basahin mo ang last comment ko sa review ni Gab. Binanggit kita. Baka isipinmo traidor akong lola. Pwede ka ng magdala ng lagari...pero yung walang kalawang ha baka matetano ang sungay ng kalabaw. Hehe

[Pax]

wala nang sungay si halimaw, mabait na yun...hehe... nakalbo na nga sa kakaputol sa sungay...hehe

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, basta ipag-pray nyo ang students ko kukuha ng assessment next week tapos yung laban namin sa Regional Technolympics. Wala dito now ang angel ko, walang pastor na magpe-pray over sa aking wish. LOL