I ONLY WANT (Free Verse)

I ONLY WANT (Free Verse)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Thanks to Chris for some help in making this piece better.

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I only want to stay as your friend
If not forever
Then for a lifetime.

I only want to feel that it's you
Who holds my hand to guide me
When I'm in the darkest part of my journey
Be my light
And my shelter
My strength to carry on
When  the road seems too rough.

I only want to hear your words
As my inspiration
For the courage to move on
Even when I have to climb a peak
There's no doubt
Because I know you're here
(Where your words reside)
In my heart and mind.

I only want to make you feel
That I'm just here for you
To stay as your friend
Wishing the best things for you.

I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't care anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if it would hurt me.

All I want is the best for you
And I hope
That you can see that
Because I...
I am your true friend
No matter what.

And when the tests come along the way
I hope I could be strong enough
To hold on to that friendship.

I have loosen my grip for a moment
But I promise...


I'll just remember your words
And things will be alright.





© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)



Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

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"I only want you to be happy
So when the time comes
That you don't need me anymore
I have to be ready
To accept every word
Even if they would hurt me."

i remember my science subject on symbiotic relationship: mutualism and parasitism. ideally, friends help each other and they benefit from each other (mutualism). if a person kept on benefiting from the other without returning the favor that in the long-run harmed the latter...i call that kind of relationship as parasitism...i hope i won't have a parasite friend. lol...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Pax

10 Years Ago

hahaha, wala na yung lagari, naging scrap kasi kulang sa talim...hehe.. joke lng dhaye..
bawas.. read more
gabrielle

10 Years Ago

hahaha. ang kulit.
shhhh...ako yung bagong gising...tinago ko kalahati ng face kasi may mark .. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

. LOL



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I think you did a good job on this..you said what was in your heart..and that can never be discredited.
I have had similar feeling...I know this gentle grinding..

Good job young lady.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Scott.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott.......
Hear My Mind Your first stanza looks good but needs a little tweaking . Forever and lifetime doesn't seem to go hand in hand . If not forever then even for a brief moment . Its a bit realistic and has some bite to it .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Author Unknown

10 Years Ago

Yes that could be true on the idealistic side of life . Your readers and audience might prefer the p.. read more
Author Unknown

10 Years Ago

Sorry I saw your point . Ignore my thoughts . Though its not practical you still wants and aiming fo.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

I know some people may frown when they hear something like this about friendship. But that's me and .. read more

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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