TONIGHT

Tonight I'll sleep
With a smile on my face
Because I can't keep
That some had won the race.

Tonight I'll celebrate
The victory I have
The high place and rate
A new chance to grab.

Tonight I will claim
The triumph of all
Tomorrow's not the same
That no one would fall...

Author's Note

There's always a second chance. I know they will make it 100% next time.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive feel of the poem. Sometime we must find the good in the day and look forward to the new one coming. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit, CP.

[Antoñyo]

Loved..ADORED the feel in this piece, and the picture is a beautiful match!

Thanks for sharing

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Next time I will put my own pic. LOL.
Thanks a lot, A. Always smile. =)

[Cassie]

Tomorrow's not the same That no one would fall... true true true. tomorrow has bigger great promises

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I'm so optimistic when it comes to school matters. Thank you, Cassie!

[Sami Khalil]

Victory is deserved if it is earned with high honors. The victorious deserves all the fruits of it. You have penned a bright one...:).................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

The victory of my students is my victory, too. Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true...You lead, they follow the leader...:)...................

[Shaquana Adams]

Tonight I'll celebrate
The victory I have
The high place and rate
A new chance to grab

This is a bright notion. You are a really gifted writer :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much!

[Scott Metro]

Glad you're glad...hate it when you're down.
Nice, bright words here..

Scott

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you. This is about the triumph of my students. Their victory gives me more smile. =)

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott......

[Frieda P]

A sweet notion Dhyae, I'll have to try that smiling whilst I sleep, if I could ever sleep! ;-)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Why not? Thanks, Frieda. =)

[Frieda P]

I don't know, have had insomnia for quite some time, that's why I wear my crankypants....my pleasure always Dhaye. :-)

[gabrielle]

A toast for that victory, dhaye!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. Thanks, Gab...pray-pray na naman ang lola mo tonight para bukas dagdag celebration pa. LOL

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

That's the reason why we always celebrate the current, because it last... great write Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Baby brother...jan ka pala? LOL. Miss you here...especially your writings. When will you post the contents of your latest titles? LOL

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Tatapusin ko ang mga naumpisahan pahinga muna ako sa kabilang mundo hehe.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. Okay naman yung project mo doon eh. Imagine, lahat ng kinita nyo sa community service pala napunta? Sana tinapunan mo ako ng isang maleta. May byahe ako papauntang Palawan sa Feb 3. Hehe