TONIGHT

TONIGHT

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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I'll sleep with a smile...

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Tonight I'll sleep
With a smile on my face
Because I can't keep
That some had won the race.

Tonight I'll celebrate
The victory I have
The high place and rate
A new chance to grab.

Tonight I will claim
The triumph of all
Tomorrow's not the same
That no one would fall...



© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)
There's always a second chance. I know they will make it 100% next time.

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I like the positive feel of the poem. Sometime we must find the good in the day and look forward to the new one coming. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, CP.
Loved..ADORED the feel in this piece, and the picture is a beautiful match!

Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Next time I will put my own pic. LOL.
Thanks a lot, A. Always smile. =)
Tomorrow's not the same That no one would fall... true true true. tomorrow has bigger great promises

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

I'm so optimistic when it comes to school matters. Thank you, Cassie!
Victory is deserved if it is earned with high honors. The victorious deserves all the fruits of it. You have penned a bright one...:).................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

The victory of my students is my victory, too. Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Wow. So true...You lead, they follow the leader...:)...................
Tonight I'll celebrate
The victory I have
The high place and rate
A new chance to grab

This is a bright notion. You are a really gifted writer :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Glad you're glad...hate it when you're down.
Nice, bright words here..

Scott

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you. This is about the triumph of my students. Their victory gives me more smile. =)
Scott Metro

6 Years Ago

:)
Scott......
A sweet notion Dhyae, I'll have to try that smiling whilst I sleep, if I could ever sleep! ;-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Why not? Thanks, Frieda. =)
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I don't know, have had insomnia for quite some time, that's why I wear my crankypants....my pleasure.. read more
A toast for that victory, dhaye!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Thanks, Gab...pray-pray na naman ang lola mo tonight para bukas dagdag celebration pa. LOL
That's the reason why we always celebrate the current, because it last... great write Dhaye.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Wow! Baby brother...jan ka pala? LOL. Miss you here...especially your writings. When will you post t.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

6 Years Ago

Tatapusin ko ang mga naumpisahan pahinga muna ako sa kabilang mundo hehe.
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Okay naman yung project mo doon eh. Imagine, lahat ng kinita nyo sa community service pala nap.. read more

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