HERE IN MY HEART (Zejel)

I'll keep your name

You are the song, I’ll  always sing,

You give the notes, what joy they bring

I hope we’ll never be apart

 

You are the paint on my canvass

With you I see no hidden  glass

And now the rain has stopped at last!

I wish, my love you’ll not depart.

 

You are the gem I want to keep

With you I feel I wouldn’t weep

My love for you goes strong and deep

I know, my love, we’ll do our part.

 

You are the apple of my eye

You are my one, don’t say goodbye

With you my heart will never die

Your name I’ll  keep here in  my heart.

Author's Note

*Zejel - a humorous poem, usually 8 syllables per line, but this can vary. First verse is 2 or 3 rhyming lines and following verses are 3 rhyming lines and then another line that rhymes with the last line of the first verse.


Credits to: "Types of Poetry" section. Zejel: http://jpicforum.info
showthread.php?p=3412#post3412
Special thanks to: Ms. Jewel and Stargazer's pieces
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Julie-Ward/1304393/
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/asilrrac/1307862/

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

I don't really care to pay attention to the structure here as much as the words:::Powerfully heartfelt and allows the light of your essence to shine through!
Loved it!

thanks for sharing

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Seems that you are energetic today, A. Thank you so much. =)

[Saddam]

You are the apple of my eye
You are my one, don’t say goodbye
With you my heart will never die
Your name I’ll keep here in my heart.
This so lovely poem.....passion for love such like this is amazing...love a lot dear...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for the visit this day, Ssadd.

[Saddam]

My pleasure dear....

[MsJewel]

A gorgeous Zejel! One of my favorite forms and it is perfect for this lovely poem!

:) Julie

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you Ms. Julie.

[Antonio Valentino]

very sweet Dhaye as always

have a wonderful weekend

:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, AV. Have a wonderful weekend, too. :)

[Linda alexander]

You are the gem I want to keep
With you I feel I wouldn’t weep
Great write, true requests and expectations, well written poem

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Linda.

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, my pleasure

[Frieda P]

I don't know if it's humorous, I think it's adorable, love ~

You are the paint on my canvass

what a great line, it's a little gem Dhaye

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks so much, Frieda. =)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Dhaye :-)

[Giggling Star]

I get to be first! You are very quick if you just came up with this ... I worked a long time on mine. Very nice write.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

LOL. You're just too humble. Thank you for the visit, Star. You're still the Star for All Seasons here. Always smile. =)

[Giggling Star]

;=D ........ Star